This Jonin Is Unrivaled Under Heaven

The fruit becomes elemental as soon as you eat it. It's really stupid to have to create it twice.

Natural system is like instinct, it consumes a lot of money

Why do you guys who write about Devil Fruit have to create a new one? The original book doesn't say that using Devil Fruit will consume a lot of physical energy. Please refer to sugar. Isn't the Childish Fruit harmful to you? How come she didn't die of exhaustion after turning more than half of the residents of Dressrosa into toys for so long? Also, Uta pulled the souls of 70% of the world's people into the Uta world in an instant. According to your writing, Uta's physical strength is more than the four emperors combined? Besides, Momonosuke's artificial devil fruit was almost undeveloped and ripened, and then he directly fought Kaido back and forth. Don't create another one.

Holy Mother, no one else cares about you

If a modern person traveled to Naruto, who would foolishly go through life and death for the indigenous forces? Who will sacrifice their lives for them? Pretty stupid. Who cares about such an idiot protagonist?

It's really average, the two Slam Dunk books are better. Go back and write slam dunk

Let's go back and write slam dunk

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