Zongwu Emperor: in the Opening Scene, Mrs. Guo Enters the Palace at Night

I don't ask you to restore the character's image, at least don't write it as mentally retarded. Let alone Huang Rong in this period, even if the Condor just appeared, his face would be red and hairy as if he had been drugged for no apparent reason. He has a husband and children, and he still does this with you? This is not a big problem. It can be understood that the character's OOC serves the plot. After all, it is normal for mixed martial arts. The problem is that the foreshadowing is so long and it doesn't feel satisfying at all. It relies on Huang Rong, a wife with bad attributes, to attract attention. Fei Lu's good books are all about emotional plots that keep going up. As a reader, I understand that. I don't want to talk about the protagonist. It fits the image of the protagonist often seen in bad books by Fei Lu. He is a loser at heart and can't stand up a character at all. Shyness and domineering are two contradictory attributes. You may want to write that the protagonist is domineering, calm, and knows the art of emperors. He gives jujubes and sticks, is good at handling people, and is awesome, but what you write is that he has cerebral palsy.

We look forward to the protagonist's Furong Garden being upgraded to Furong Xiang Garden as soon as possible.

The divisions of these realms are completely unclear. They are not as clear as the Vajra Ordinary Realm, the Free Earth Realm, the Free Heaven Realm, and the Divine Movement Realm. They are not as suitable as the Snow Realm, the Innate Vajra Realm, the Zhixuan Master Realm, the Celestial Grandmaster, the Earth Dispersion Fairy Realm, and the Earth, Heaven and Human Realm.

Commentary on Chapter 43: Blood-stained Golden Palace in "Emperor of Zongwu: Madam Guo Enters the Palace at Night" written by He Tuluo.