Martial Arts Emperor: From the Start, Madam Guo Enters the Imperial Palace at Night

The foreshadowing is too long. After reading thirty chapters, except for Huang Rong, there is nothing exciting. It keeps writing about how she is controlled by others, how the protagonist's talent is not good, and the martial arts he learned is not outstanding.

Laughing, let alone the trouble brought by Jia's family, since you have enjoyed the glory brought by Jia, you must bear the blame. What's more, a large part of the civil servants are due to lack of manpower. Even if they are guilty, they are retained. And now the country's army is weak, you can only The majesty established by killing one Jia Sidao and two gangsters is absolutely not enough. You can only destroy the nine clans and let the people below know that although I will not kill you, I will dare to kill your nine clans as long as you make a mistake. Now you are causing trouble and cannot bring harm to your family. How can majesty be enough?

I don't ask you to restore the character's image, at least don't write it as mentally retarded. Let alone Huang Rong in this period, even if the Condor just appeared, his face would be red and hairy as if he had been drugged for no apparent reason. He has a husband and children, and he still does this with you? This is not a big problem. It can be understood that the character's OOC serves the plot. After all, it is normal for mixed martial arts. The problem is that the foreshadowing is so long and it doesn't feel satisfying at all. It relies on Huang Rong, a wife with bad attributes, to attract attention. Fei Lu's good books are all about emotional plots that keep going up. As a reader, I understand that. I don't want to talk about the protagonist. It fits the image of the protagonist often seen in bad books by Fei Lu. He is a loser at heart and can't stand up a character at all. Shyness and domineering are two contradictory attributes. You may want to write that the protagonist is domineering, calm, and knows the art of emperors. He gives jujubes and sticks, is good at handling people, and is awesome, but what you write is that he has cerebral palsy.

You have a bit of cerebral palsy, you are an emperor, you run around all day long, and you also like to do things by yourself. You are the emperor. . .

Seeing Jia Sidao's success reminds me of one of Huang Rong's pornographic books

Although One Qi Transforms Three Pure Ones belongs to the protagonist, don't mess with things, otherwise a group of readers may be lost.

Nondescript, nothing.

This novel shouldn't be here

With Guo Jing here, Xiangyang is worry-free. What if you sleep with his wife and the honest man turns evil?

Last year, someone wrote that the main character was fake and too cheap, and Mrs. Guo broke into the palace at night.