The Pinnacle of the Immortal Path
仙道至高
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2k Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
1Chapters
111Reads
525Flowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 2
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The plot moves too fast. In just three chapters, the protagonist comes down the mountain and has a conflict with a family and a city lord. It feels like he is helping the girl to avoid disaster. Try to write that the protagonist only conflicts with others for the resources to cultivate immortality.
We know that any excellent novel author attaches great importance to environmental details, character language and personality presentation. However, the information in the first two chapters of this book is highly distorted and omits too much interaction between the natural environment and character behavior. This is a low price. If the plot develops too fast and you have nowhere to write at the end, you can only "send the razor blade" to the author.