Honkai Impact 3rd: I Became a Herrscher

What you wrote is too confusing, and the protagonist Xun has become a god for thousands of years, but his mind is like that of a minor.

The true energy and the power of nature that destroy the world are actually Honkai Energy

Author, can you do a good job with the punctuation? Is there what it should be? I'm confused.

It would be fine if you didn't write that the protagonist is in the stage of transformation into a god. But if you write it, your cultivation will be gone and your physical body will be gone. Wouldn't it be just like an ordinary person who is better at it? Why did you write it? Of course, I didn't read the back because I used Feilu, and I didn't have the patience to read the back. (╥╯╰╥)?

But it's uncomfortable to eat the guaranteed amount at the same time!

*, The protagonist has no sense of existence at all, and the identity of the time traveler is just like a decoration. Although Yae Rin was saved, the Herrscher of Corrosion was not solved, and Rin was either dead or disabled due to the inertia of the plot. The same goes for the Herrscher identity. Since you know that the Herrscher of Corrosion will cause trouble, why don't you solve it in advance and wait for the situation to overturn? Having learned a lesson before and not knowing how to be cautious, you might as well start over and write other books.

This typesetting and punctuation are just like playing, Is the author trying to make mistakes? The word count is here, It's not like no one is watching Honkai Impact. Your typesetting and punctuation are perfect. Can't you refine it yourself? There is no "" in the dialogue, I don't know who is speaking, Sometimes it's first person, and sometimes it switches to third person. This is not the case for junior high school students when writing essays.

When you do this, don't you have any symbols in the dialogue you wrote? It's very hard to read. Which ones are aside and which ones are dialogues? It's very hard to read without any punctuation.

Trees and the sea actually coexist

I haven't seen this book even when searching for Honkai fanfics. What's going on_||This data is too low. There have been so many updates. It's really hard for the author.