From the Start, I Awaken Dual Time-and-Space Powers

To be honest, I read this book It's purely because the protagonist has the ability to pause time. But what do you say after watching it briefly? Compared with my outline, plot, and characters Too novice. There is also a strong sense of dissonance, and it even gives people the feeling that a random person with a system would be no worse than him. In my novel, the protagonist travels ten years before the plot begins, and uses time to stop to lay out and build forces. Although he has powerful natural abilities, he cannot become stronger due to time travel. You need to disguise your character and identity to find him, get close to the original protagonist, and plunder his ability to become infinitely stronger. How to plunder is another ability of the protagonist. It is equivalent to the protagonist having a full character at the beginning, similar to Aizen and Obito. But he can't become stronger, he can only wait for the plot to begin

The subject matter is very good, the ideas are okay, and it fits the plot of Shuangwen. However, the writing is not enough, the plot is dragging, and it seems to be a fake article. The logical reading is not enough. There are punctuation errors in the chapters, like colons are added when the content is clearly not talking, and then it is a bit weird. It is said to be incredible. It just happened that the higher-ups didn't know about it, and they wrote the martial arts test, but they kept sleeping with the results. Others have to question it first. This is like a slap in the face, and few people like it now. Secondly, the ability of the upper-level people to obtain information has been weakened too much, which is a bit intellectually demoralizing. Come on! It's okay to read the book briefly, but not to read it carefully, but I believe you will definitely make great progress in the next book, and your grades will definitely be very good, of course after the questions are corrected.

Because the author was too sloppy, there were problems with the realm of Chapter 2. I'm really sorry, because the modified and uploaded content is too complicated, so I will update it here to explain. Before the fusion time ability. The system panel is: Name: Yan Han Age: 18 Level: Black Iron Mirror mid-term 100/300

The writing style still has some shortcomings, but it's rare that it doesn't hide and hide things, so I have to give it a thumbs up.

This is how new books come about. Although there are a few minor issues. But it doesn't matter. A small reward. I hope the author is not a eunuch, come on.

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