Everyone's an Editor: Editing the Light of Hope from the Start

It's hard to find a book that can be written, so don't mess around with the rhythm, okay? I admit that the writing and foreshadowing are a bit weak, but I think the plot is not too bad. First point, I don't know where it says "pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger". From the beginning to the end, the protagonist is a gangster who will never beep if he can take action. The second point is that the character is an idiot and only knows how to ridicule. Then I would like to ask you if someone takes something that belongs to you. Are you angry in your heart? The protagonist Qin Shu is an orphan and has not been treated by his peers since he was a child. At the certified editor conference, he used the shortest time to win the first certified editor award that everyone has been thinking about. Once the award is obtained, it cannot be transferred to others. When encountering such a person who "takes love with a sword", how can He Tianli, as the elder of the family, have a good temper? The third point is, "The protagonist has Tiga's ability and cannot even defeat two natives." Just read one sentence in the book! I don't know who the two natives you are referring to are, but as far as the book is currently written, it is most likely that they are He Tianli and He Tiansheng, the father and son of the He family. Is the protagonist aggrieved by the description of these two people? Or, if you like a protagonist who uses all his tricks when you meet him, you should try your best to show off as many tricks as you can to outsiders at once. When the protagonist is sure of victory, he can defeat the enemy at a very small cost and still leave a sense of mystery to outsiders. Isn't this a good way to write? And the saying "can't beat", you can tell from that plot, I didn't even know it when I wrote it myself. To deal with the He family and his son, the protagonist did not use much of the editor's power. He relied entirely on Diga's basic attributes to win. In the end, the barren monster seriously injured He Tiansheng. The protagonist had no choice but to escape He Tiansheng. He was rescued by the altar. Here we will talk about how to grow after obtaining the editor, which will be written later. Okay, apart from these plot aspects, are there any poisonous points? I explained it all at once, and it was clearly written in detail in the book. When I saw your comments, three English words "mmp" came to my mind. Oh yes, and the plot is cliche. In the National Series, most of the plots in the school have more than three chapters. I wrote one chapter and the plot moved forward directly. To be honest, this kind of series has some similarities. I didn't write a long and lengthy article about the ridicule of the protagonist by the students, the dean, the school belle, and the school belle. Let's flatter him! The only ones written by He Tiansheng and Yuan Hai were also written to advance the plot. After I finished writing, I was worried that you wouldn't like the way I wrote so quickly, without a detailed process, or enough emotional fermentation. Now you're calling me old-fashioned? Okay, you're right, ah, yes, yes** From now on, I won't read comments or reply very much. It affects me too much to keep writing. Finally, I wish you all a happy New Year, all the best, and make a fortune every day!

The content in the book is clearly written, so why are there still blind people? When you say that two natives like me can't fight each other to death, I really doubt whether you have watched it or not. The plot is not good at all. From the beginning, we defeated the family with one person's power. How could there be any frustration?

The character descriptions of the protagonist and villain are too general, and the twists are too blunt. It would be better to add some psychological description.

The setting is quite good, but the writing is not very good, and there are quite a lot of bugs. It can be seen that the violence of the protagonist is highlighted, but the combat power is still a little bit behind. It would be great if it could really crush the heroine's legs and character. I can say that it is remarkable.

Commentary on the second chapter of "Edit for All: Beginning Editor's Light of Hope" written by Yinyi, the light of hope, Tiga.

Why does it always start with this routine, making those people look like idiots?

Because the previous plot contained outdated clichés and was awkward, I only read about 10 chapters quickly and didn't read the rest. Just from the first few chapters, I had no hope for the educational system of the novel's country. A descendant of a Silver family with a dozen or so editors and one with at least two stars, just a descendant of the family, dared to kill students at will in a ceremony in the presence of the military, and threatened the emperor in public. **I also compromised, which I never expected. Afterwards, the military department came to recruit the protagonist. Why did you go there earlier?

It's this kind of cerebral palsy pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger again!

With Tiga as a big boss, he can't even defeat two natives.

Why are compound and strong forms the same strength?