Uncle Jiu's First Disciple: Target One Million Times the Speed of the Technique

When writing novels, it's best to follow the popular name for the protagonist. Don't use those messy names. Even if you write a good-looking first chapter, the protagonist is Wang Er*, Wang Erdan, *bastard. In this way, I can say that at least some people will not want to continue reading.

1. Qiu Sheng and Wen Cai are your father, even more so than your real father. This is not a question of whether to wipe the butt or not. It's not enough to help others find wives, but also to help them support their families. If the system's skills can be transferred, the protagonist will be transferred. 2. It's Ren Tingting again, I'll get bored if I watch too much. Nothing exciting anymore. Just like 30 years in Hedong and 30 years in Hexi. I was quite happy when I first watched it, but I almost vomited after watching it too much. Nine out of ten books belong to him! The other one has no heroine.

It's nothing to write a heroine, but a few supporting characters, and so much nonsense. It's not a waste of time. Every time she appears, she can write half a chapter or more. The frequency of her appearance is not low, and it's all nonsense that can be copied and pasted.

Good guy, at the beginning he said that he was reincarnated through time travel, and later he said that he also brought a hiking bag with him when he time travel. Show off.

Don't use real celebrities when writing novels, okay? Not everyone has the same aesthetics, so this is equivalent to driving a nail into the reader's heart that cannot be removed. Especially the main characters.

I was convinced by the forced restriction and forced reduction of intelligence. If you can't write it, don't write it. After reading the introduction and the previous chapter, I thought it was a cool article. Madd just read more than ten chapters and forced restriction and reduction of intelligence. It is obviously a level transfer. One person upgraded to level 5 but still has a bunch of level 12 skills. Not all of them have been transferred to 5. I have to practice them one by one slowly. What settings?

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Are you writing about a male god? Are you sure it's not the Duck King?

In fact, you can still watch it.

The protagonist believes that the Maoshan masters all became immortals by relying on uninitiated skills, and he became an immortal by just trying them. What is the difference between this and saying that Hua Luogeng is new to mathematics?

I have never touched a werewolf, and said: It's so itchy, my brain is about to grow.

Xin Qiji seems not very honest

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