Wuxia Crossover: Opening a Martial Arts School in Snow Moon City and Taking Li Hanyi as a Disciple

Seeing that your Sacred Heart Technique can hit a hundred times the critical hit with ease, I don't want to watch it anymore. You make Emperor Huangtian look cheap like this.

He keeps saying that he won't interfere, but he keeps blocking it openly and covertly. He does one thing on the surface and another behind the scenes. The protagonist is like a villain! You don't take action but you don't stop the apprentice from taking action. If something happens to the apprentice, you will definitely take action. The promise of such a person is no different from that of adultery. Moreover, a strong person does not have any majesty or magnanimity and can be used casually by others to ask for benefits at will. This is the reason why Feilu's author will never be a great writer. His writing techniques are so weak. How can he compare with others?

It's pretty good. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs and the quantity can be smaller. I hope the writing style isn't too bad.

Isn't it strange that a ninth-grade martial artist has so many super-standard techniques? The protagonist's true cultivation level should be hidden so that people can't figure it out. It's really stupid to stupidly tell others that he is only a ninth-level martial artist. You don't even know how to pretend, and you've already preached for others, so what's the point of playing the next-level challenge? And can such super-standard fantasy skills as Xing Zi Mi be spread? It was passed on directly, and the system did not return a stronger skill from a critical hit. Someone asked the protagonist if he created the technique by himself, but the protagonist denied that it was not the case. In addition, the protagonist foolishly revealed his ninth-level martial arts cultivation. Doesn't this make it clear that he has a great opportunity to tell others, and the same is true when using the "*" sword technique? Can't you directly admit that it is your own sword intention? It must be said that it is a nine-leaf sword*, do you want someone to snatch it?

There is a harem tag attached, and I have almost finished watching it. I have not recommended any girls, and even accepted men. It is so vicious. .

What's awesome about the author is that you have seven books, and what's even more awesome is that all seven of your books have been updated accordingly.

If you don't accept women, can you mark the harem as a waste of money?

*The Ten Secret Techniques of the Immortal King with the word Sword Jue, this is a reward. I saw that this book is not interesting. It is similar to those books on intellectual disabilities. The names given to the protagonist's skills are misleading, and the result is like a piece of shit.

You don't need to push like a bulldozer right away. You should push at least one or two within a hundred chapters and then add some new female characters from time to time to interact with H welfare to attract more readers. You can't do this. It's too procrastinating and will make some readers impatient and leave, including me. Unless your plot is so good that most readers will temporarily ignore the women you recommend. , And more importantly, new readers who want to see pig's feet pushing women will be persuaded to leave if they see so many chapters of pig's feet in the comment area and even if they don't push a woman, after all, this is Feilu and you have been labeled as a harem, and this book is a mixed martial arts fan. The world view emphasizes that the weak eat the strong and the strong are respected. In this world, relationships are all about getting on the bus first and then paying for it. After a few days, you will obey.

I've read more than 70 chapters, and you didn't even take away a girl. I haven't even touched my hand. What are you writing? Eunuch article? Don't go too far into the harem when it comes to eunuchs. The overall writing is okay, but this aspect is very annoying.