Genshin Impact's Dimensional Portal: Hunting Down the Great Sage from the Start!

At least, this book achieves the opening of the title and promotes the great sage. It is much better than some openings that end up not even being able to see the beginning of the book.

He still doesn't admit that he is a great sage

Just write a few random words and add a bunch of realistic supernatural forces.

Let me tell you what water means, that is, you have not written what the readers want to see, so no matter what you write, it is all water. So what do you think the readers of your book want to see? Could it be that what readers want to see is that you sent people to hunt down another inexplicable time traveler with evil eyes in the real world? With all due respect, your plot is completely a minus. It can no longer be regarded as pure water. I am the only one who can do the double-travel door, and suddenly another time traveler comes out. Do you think this is a cool point? Why did you write this kind of plot? What happens in the main character's home base that you think readers would like to read?

Once upon a time, the Great Sage was a system. Now the Great Sage is a disgrace.

In **, I cleaned the ancestral hall alone. The ancestral hall in my hometown is still the same as before. Even though it has been renovated countless times, the style of a thousand years ago still shows a trace of simplicity and elegance. Grandpa said that the ancestral hall in his hometown is called "Zhai", which is where the ancestor lived all his life ** years ago. Every tile, every comic, and every figure there is an antique with a history of thousands of years. Despite the vicissitudes of life, those old objects have not been thrown away after all. They are kept quietly and well preserved, as if the ancestors will return to the house one day and tell us the meaning of each antique. The most precious thing in the room is a smartphone placed in the center of the desk. It was an object from a thousand years ago, but has now been eliminated. Even the oldest man has forgotten how to use it, but he only vaguely knows that it once ruled an era. Legend has it that when our ancestors were dying, they could not close their eyes while holding their mobile phones, as if they were waiting for a certain author...

It's already starting to collapse. Didn't you write an outline? Nowadays, many people don't like that there are other extraordinary beings in reality, especially since most Genshin Impact novels are biased towards entertainment. You should see for yourself what you are writing. Who are you? What the hell is this book about? Stop writing it and cut it up quickly. I was still fattening it up, but now I see what this book is about.

Brushing Wuxiang* every day, it still doesn't admit that it is a great sage.

I just want to say that the author should be clear about the audience he is writing this book for. We are here to make things right for you, not for the messy and miscellaneous plots you wrote about reality.

It is indeed a collapse, and you shouldn't do it like that. These routines were okay twenty years ago, but now they are basically collapsed. Not many people will like this routine.