Comprehensive Comic: Building a Group of Gods Starting from the Devil

What kind of shit did you write? You copied Zha Yue's The Supreme from beginning to end, but you wanted to write something of your own, and ended up writing the same shit.

In my opinion, the main or even the only big problem is that the author insists on giving the protagonist a setting of living for hundreds of millions of years, but the protagonist behaves like an ordinary teenager or 20-year-old. But I really don't want to show the protagonist a feeling of living for hundreds of millions of years. After all, I really can't match my age here. Also, the first few pictures can really be deleted, which doesn't mean it can't be done, but when you think about it, it's an illusion, or a dream? Anyway, the thought of it being fake is annoying. Just start with the content in the introduction and mention it directly. The protagonist relies on the system and is about to be promoted to the Demon God perfectly, but is discovered by the forbidden Demon Gods, and then is forced to leave the Demon God. Then just start blood-devouring the world and attack the world, right?

Stop talking about those who say that the Demon God's authority is *. First, in the Demon Forbidden City, there were Demon Gods first and then myths. Demon Gods are the prototypes of myths, so stop talking about things on this point. Second, phases are created by Demon Gods. Demon Gods are the gods of magic and wisdom. They are the products of infinite knowledge. They use infinite knowledge to create phases to control the world. , Phases are superimposed by all the demons over and over again. They are things that do not exist. They are even larger than the world. In the original work, there is a section where Othinus destroyed the universe with a single click. Aleister's daughter Lilith was destined to die because of the friction of the phase sparks. And because the phases were created by the demons, Aleister hated the demons.

The Forbidden Demon God is powerful in this world, but she is useless after leaving this world. Just like that Odin, she is not the real Odin, she just made herself into that position, and she is nothing after leaving this world. With Odin in Hakoba, this Odin's combat power can crush her to death.

The demon god Odin is blind in one eye. What's there to gain? What's more, he's an enemy and kills her.

Forget it if you don't go looking for ladies from all over the world, even if you go for Internet celebrities, it's much cleaner than those in the entertainment industry.

One template is invincible. Why not write so many templates and enhance them on one template?

As long as the big explosion of the earth doesn't matter, the bad environment will have a great impact on mankind.

Can you not make the main character look like a crazy guy?

Brothers, the destructive power of the human summit is equivalent to that level

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