Anime Crossover: Building a Pantheon Starting with the Demon Gods

Looking at your book, the gap is not as big as usual. At the beginning, the protagonist is given a setting of living for more than one billion years, but it is not obvious that all your wisdom of more than one billion years has gone there. Also, when you meet a female character, you drop it

Having lived in the Demonic Forbidden City for hundreds of millions of years, he is older than many Demon Gods. However, the difference in IQ is too great. He speaks cruel words even before running away. He is speechless, as if the other Demon Gods cannot hear him. Even if the reality does not prevent the Demon God from understanding the situation, saying it or not is another matter. When it comes to blood-thirsty, he behaves even worse when he is rejected, as if everything should go according to his wishes. The strong man does not have much will, but he has learned a lot about arrogance.

What kind of shit did you write? You copied Zha Yue's The Supreme from beginning to end, but you wanted to write something of your own, and ended up writing the same shit.

I came up with a really awesome setting, but it turned out that it didn't fit in and I ended up being a loser. Then you might as well not do it in the first place. Hanging sheep's heads to sell *meat.

The author will talk about some of the problems I saw. It may be a bit confusing and not very good at expressing. When I left the forbidden world at the beginning, I was a little too frustrated. The devil actually got benefits for them. This is very unpleasant. This point should be arranged to let them wait for their own ending in the world. Also, the protagonist is about to cross the abyss but has no wisdom at all. The devil is also the god of wisdom. The protagonist has no wisdom about many things. Hui behaves like an ordinary person. The Demon God is the God of Almighty and Wisdom. He is the product of infinite knowledge. They create phases with infinite knowledge to control the world. By the way, for those who talk about authority, let me tell you that the myth of the forbidden world is that the Demon God comes first and then the myth. So how do you get around this? The Demon God is the prototype of the myth, and the phase is also created by the Demon God to dominate the world. The phase is something superimposed by the Demon God that should not exist to distort the world.

The protagonist is a stinky loser who has not seen a woman in many years.

The combat power is completely unreliable. It all depends on the mood of the author. Aye, who hasn't learned a magic book in a month, has reached the top of the human race in six years. Yoshino violently beat the first true ancestor. Orpheus expanded to the size of the solar system. God-killer Athena blocked the attack of Orpheus that could turn the planet into a ball.

This is what my brain has been doing for hundreds of millions of years.

Is the protagonist still a little boy after eons of experience? Why not just run away in the first place? Ten minutes is enough time to tamper with the memory and open the door to escape. Do you have to be caught again and run away again? The setting of the book is good, and the writing is not bad, but the content is easy to make me complain.

In my opinion, the main or even the only big problem is that the author insists on giving the protagonist a setting of living for hundreds of millions of years, but the protagonist behaves like an ordinary teenager or 20-year-old. But I really don't want to show the protagonist a feeling of living for hundreds of millions of years. After all, I really can't match my age here. Also, the first few pictures can really be deleted, which doesn't mean it can't be done, but when you think about it, it's an illusion, or a dream? Anyway, the thought of it being fake is annoying. Just start with the content in the introduction and mention it directly. The protagonist relies on the system and is about to be promoted to the Demon God perfectly, but is discovered by the forbidden Demon Gods, and then is forced to leave the Demon God. Then just start blood-devouring the world and attack the world, right?