
Seafaring: I Surround Marineford with a Monster Army
航海,带着怪兽军团包围顶上
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 27k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
12Chapters
956.4kReads
972Flowers
10.0Score
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Everyone is tired of seeing the one who saves Ace with a *hat and would rather watch Luffy, the king of Ace.
What is your introduction about?
Calling Ryunosuke this name is just a shame for a bunch of people.
It's only Chapter 11. It starts with the protagonist gaining strength, and then intervenes during the execution of the Pirate King, and it goes directly to the time when the protagonist group arrives in Rogge Town. The period before the beginning of the plot is skipped, but it can't be counted, but after the plot begins, it is a bit too fast. It feels like it is based on the original work. Intervening with some details, the process is described in one stroke, and then the ending is concluded in two or three sentences, and then jumps to the next plot, and repeats it again, but it is a bit hasty, and the combat aspect is not written much. For example, when entering the world of pirates for the first time, how was Golzan besieged and killed? For another example, in Xiluobu Village, the battle was resolved in 10 minutes. Who took action? How? I haven't written it down yet. When you see that one, you have to imagine it yourself. Imagine the scene, imagine who took action, imagine the consequences after the action, imagine who was beaten, imagine who was attacked, imagine what twists and turns there were, and imagine whether there were any ups and downs.
Nowadays, most people who write about pirates start from the beginning. Can you be a little innovative? You can join half way through when you write that you want to join a partner! If it doesn't work, add it as shown at the top of your title