In the Shinobi World, I Summon the Ultimate Life Form Kars from the Start

But hey, the invincible Kazsama can defeat the entire Hokage alone, but you say he can't even beat F4?

If you really want to add all the two-dimensional shadow levels and give them a D level, then it will be a B level. The few C levels that appear now can all play the dead shadow level.

The Black Shadow Troops are indeed not strong. They can't even beat the genin in single combat. There's nothing wrong with that. Mainly because you cut down Kaz, Brother A and the others who became the ultimate creatures. The most important thing is that you don't write about Naruto as a fantasy. Before the Six Paths, Naruto was all about high attack and low health, except for a few exceptions. A single kunai can hurt or even kill a Kage, you have to take this into consideration. Unlike fantasy fairy tales and the like, where high-level ones completely suppress low-level ones, those with attack, defense, agility, spirit, etc. Are all better than you. The level division is very clear. There is also Kaz, for example, it is very easy for him to learn ninjutsu. And the amount of chakra is also terrifying. You haven't written any of these features.

Ultimate Kaz is immortal, so be careful and kill Naruto.

Is this what Kaz is doing?

To be honest, reading your book, I feel that the summoned characters are weakened but not weakened. I don't know why, so it's quite uncomfortable to read. Also, the introduction is a bit long. There is no need for a long introduction for low-level things. Shadow level and above can use more. For other things, you either don't write an introduction or just use one line. I'm tired of writing too much.

A character like Kaz can really be used as a long-term character. After all, he does have the ability to evolve quickly. He may need to be fast in terms of plot requirements, but the protagonist knows the ability to evolve quickly but doesn't use it, which makes him feel like he has become a plot tool. Moreover, there are not many people who can become stronger quickly like Brother A, and secondly, they all have upper limits. Exploding Stars is almost the limit, so he can jump repeatedly and die after reaching the upper limit. Also, I want to know how the author handles the character's appearance? After all, the upper limit of the Naruto world is like that. It is very difficult to reach the six-level draw with emotional value, so there is a limit to the speed at which you can draw characters. After reaching the upper limit, you have to find ways to strengthen the original Naruto characters, as well as to foreshadow the plot and lead to settings. This is a process, so the speed does not need to be that fast. You can only get up with a certain sense of foreshadowing. Otherwise, it will be quite tiring just to see the characters one by one, and there must be a wonderful story. In fact, I I think there is no problem in writing a hundred chapters smaller than a big chapter. The early characters, new characters and characters who have been changed and strengthened in Naruto collide with each other in a story. There are also characters drawn and settings in the background of Naruto. For example, Demon King Piccolo is the monarch among demons, Aizen is the king's Shichibukai who protects King Lin, etc. This is the cool part of the behind-the-scenes article. Of course, considering the author's writing skills, it may be a little more difficult. I hope the author can refer to it. Come on!

The ninja group can kill shadow-level strong men.

In the ordinary world, it takes 18 days to evolve to the point where it is hard to withstand nuclear bombs, maybe to the point of hard steel Ten-tailed Beast Jade. In the world of Naruto, I can't imagine how fast it will evolve again. . . It feels like it's a little too early to appear. One person can swallow Konoha. Leave some flesh and blood before going back home. You won't be afraid of the sealing technique. You can gather around and support and slowly devour evolution.

Creatures like Kaz and Brother A that evolve very quickly have not seen their characteristics. As some people said, they feel too weak. There are too many characters and it is too confusing. If it weren't for the Royal Knights of the Church, I wouldn't have planned to watch it anymore. There is also the problem of the corps that you always mentioned. That is a small problem.