Apartment 3: A Journey Through the Myriad Worlds

Xiaobai, I came to read adventure stories, not romance dramas. And the natural devil fruit at the beginning was actually physically damaged? See you later

Because she has broad knowledge and background, she is the ideal housekeeper.

I felt quite awkward watching it. I really like this subject matter, but I couldn't get into it.

Is the author Dali a single heroine? The role of Zhuge Dali in Love Apartment is so perfect that people have to love it.

I really like this subject matter, but what you wrote is really **. There is no detailed description. It just describes the events and what to do, but there is no detailed description in between. You are not the first novel I have read over the years, but I like this subject very much. I suggest you cut this book off and start a new one or revise it, otherwise not many people will be able to read it.

Next time you write a novel, remember to add who said it before the words.

Does the heroine have Yifei or Nuolan?

Written by Xiao Xiaosen, there are too many sentence errors, the logic jumps very quickly, and the organization is too complex and not clear enough... It is polished.

I advise the author to look at the situation. If you start writing from the third season, then you'd better delete some protagonists and preferably single female protagonists. This type of novel has a characteristic in the later stage. There are too many protagonists and you don't know how to write them. It's best to have a team of lovers. If there are multiple female protagonists, you have to arrange other female protagonists. Do you want to include them later? If you don't include them, it will look fake. So my suggestion is to single female protagonist, and then It's impossible to bring everyone, so I simply delete some people, and it will inevitably lead to chaos. There are too few novels of this kind, and there are too few love apartment themes. But many of these novels focus on multiple female protagonists, and there are too many protagonists. Counting the protagonists, the best number is about eight or nine, and it is best to have 8 to make up 4 couples. For example, Xian Fei is here, Qiao Jia is great, it is just right, or if you are in a matter of life and death, you can do it again. I don't think Boyu is very interesting.

Author: Lin Wanyu, when will Qin Yumo and Zhang Wei join!