Red Mansion Comprehensive View: in the Beginning, the Soldiers Surrounded Shenjing and Fought to Become Gods.

Mac is one of the few annoying defense teams. They really can't do anything well and are the first to hold them back.

The biggest mistake of this book is that the villain route has been decided at the beginning, so you should not write the opposite character badly in order to show your justice. You should write the protagonist as a completely evil without any reason, and make Liu Bei's criticism more positive than the historical definition. In this way, those who hate him will think your writing is hypocritical enough, and those who like him will think that you have not criticized him.

I won't be happy if you don't accept everything, because what you wrote is nothing!

The protagonist is too useless, the enemy is a**,

You don't need to talk about forcefulness and the like. After all, the protagonist is not the real king himself. Don't overwhelm your fighting power, just abuse the master.

In the first chapter, I want to advise the author that since he is writing a time travel novel, he should know a little more about the plot of the original work. The hero and Fan Ruoruo have the same father and mother, and Fan Xian has the same father and mother. In the original plot, Fan Xian and Fan Ruoruo have different fathers and mothers; author, please take a closer look at what is wrong.

The author is already very skilled at turning on mechas. I have already thought of going elsewhere.

Isn't Robin's skin similar to wheat color? How could it be white skin?

Shouldn't it be said by Northeastern people that they are so stupid? Bald head should mean Niang Xipi

The author came to offer incense to your whole family on the sixth day of the Lunar New Year

The more this goes on, the more useless the male protagonist becomes, hey!

Yuanshi Tianzun is Pangu, and original Tianzun is Sanqing**

This book makes me feel really strange. It is obviously about Pokémon, but it has more chapters about Naruto than Pokémon (and it is obviously about Elf).

Unexpectedly! I've updated again! Hahaha!

I was masculine and it's already gone. You were masculine two days before me. How could you not be cured yet? If you're a eunuch, just tell me and I won't wait.

Really stop having twins, you're either going to be caught or on the way to being caught

I don't want to look at the next few real ink stains.

When will Chapter 51 be released? This plot is so broken, it's so frustrating.

Why don't you burst into chapter 20?

I'll keep it for now and wait for the author to come back and update~~

After writing Tianlong, go and write Yitian

They are brothers Guo Jing. Shouldn't their surname be Guo? Why are they surnamed Lin? Is it because I don't care?

Why was Izayoi transformed into a girl? . .

I hope the time fruit and space fruit will come out soon, author, come on

Why are you so awesome despite your low level? The four famous arresters who are famous all over the world are actually the lowest level.

As for the system, it only appears once at the beginning and then no matter what you do later, there is no system prompt. Isn't it a reward for completing the task? This is a bowl at the beginning and the rest is all up to you.

Come on, come on, update and update

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According to the author's description, the second woman in the protagonist, Liu Ying, should not be Chu (there is no description of Chu)