Genshin Impact: My Nine-to-Five Life at the Yashiro Commission

The author has serious secondary creation, but your current secondary creation plot has begun to deviate from the setting of the character itself. It does feel fresh at first, but once it goes on for a long time, it begins to deteriorate, which is equivalent to a completely different parallel world of Genshin Impact. The author's second creation is very new and the style is quite good, but I still hope that the second creation will not deviate from the setting of the character itself. Your current plot is equivalent to rewriting a Thunder General. The characters of Fox Fox, Toma, Lingren, Thunderbolt General, Xinhai, and Shuuluo have all been changed. Thomas doesn't like Ling Hua. Thomas is Ling Hua's elder brother. He was picked up by Ling Hua's parents.

In fact, if the author doesn't write it this way, the more you write it, the more it looks like a brand new story wearing the skin of the original god, and the characters have changed. If you really want to write a different Genshin Impact story, there is no need to do this. Genshin Impact itself has many pitfalls, and branch lines should be developed based on the main line. Your current problem is that Thomas has a crush on Ling Hua in Chapter 11. Thor has no trace of his five-hundred-year-old self-isolation, San Fengxing is all a good guy, the general is emotional and dedicated to the people, and Tan Fox has directly become a love brain. There is no foreshadowing of the relationship. Both Ling Hua and Tan Fox have a completely inexplicable affection for the protagonist. If you write like this and tell the truth, you will only get scolded. If you want to create a second creation, you can't just write it casually without any boundaries!

The first is the character of the fox. As a pink old woman who is over 500 years old, you should try your best to write that kind of smell, for example, whether you want to touch her or not. Second, this place can no longer be changed, but I still want to say that because it is too ridiculous, only the first three seats of the executive officer can compete with the gods. You, the doctor, directly competed with the God of Thunder after a wave of abyss deification. Can the third seat be able to defeat the God of Thunder? Can the God of Ice who rules them be able to defeat the God of Rock? Third, your setting is a bit abstract. For the executive's strength, I suggest it be two or three levels incremented by one seat, or five levels. As far as the original book is concerned, the third and fourth seats are the difference between humans and gods. The Prince Demon King's armed force can be 50-50 different from the first seat. Your original text said that the Dada Duck Demon King's armed force is level 80, so the first seat is around level 80. When Yingmei comes in the future, you will have to make up for this. In short, there are a lot of flaws. Corrections are welcome.

I don't think Xinhai dared to kill Sanluo, because her purpose was to get the shadow to revoke the Eye Hunting Order and the Lockdown Order. Killing Sanluo would mean completely breaking up with the shogunate, and it also means that the general will most likely take action next.

This is the first time I've seen the God of Thunder whitewashed like this. The purpose of returning the eye hunting order is to capture the evil eye. It's really lickable.

This is the first time I write a book of this type... I don't know if it will be accepted by the audience. Then I can tell the main route of the protagonist just by looking at the name... Then the question of the heroine can only be said to be there. Anyway, the eldest wife must be the only wife, Ayaka's wife!

Most people probably don't know the concept of Genshin Impact. They would only say God's Eye holder.

A bit too game-like

Keqing has experimented with it, discarded it, and smashed it, but it was still intact. No one will take this thing away.

Do you want to write about a single female protagonist in this kind of subject matter? . . . .