The World of Scientific Deduction in Anime Crossovers

The contract was changed after saying a life span of 3 years. There was no devil's code at all. It could be said that as long as the above conditions were met, the transaction could be made. In this way, I didn't have to say how many years it would be and could use language tricks. You don't have any basic integrity in trading like this,**

It can be seen from the first chapter that you have designed it, but it is at a satisfactory level. You may want to shape the protagonist into a strategist, a mastermind, a gentle scum, etc., But overall it looks nondescript and looks like a slut. . . The second chapter is simply speechless. You actually devoted a whole chapter to writing data. You don't really think readers can remember it, and as a non-intelligent system, the description with subjective evaluation is really stupid, and the description is useless, and some words are incomprehensible. In the third chapter, the protagonist's name was changed. The name "Six Paths Aoki Aoki" was so awkward that it made people physically uncomfortable, but why wasn't it changed in the first two chapters? Moreover, it is too stupid to give a whole chapter to introduce the origin and background of the protagonist and the system currency. There is no plot in two consecutive chapters, only settings and data. How many people are willing to read it? Author, you should think carefully about it. When the third golden chapter ends, what is the reader's first reaction? It's boring and uninteresting. If you don't pounce on it, who will?

In the first chapter, the author ruined the image of the protagonist into a scumbag. The author completely failed to grasp the essence of the dark series. Even a bad guy must have a shining point of personality. An unattractive protagonist is destined to become a bastard and be hated by others. In the first chapter, the author adopts Fraud, unequal trading, bullying women and children, and other things that scumbags would do. Such evil deeds that even a low-income person would despise. The author will definitely write about it. The author really has no lower limit to seek death. Only people who are worse than a low-income person will like this kind of rotten person.

This character design of the protagonist makes him look like a human, a ghost or a ghost, a god or a god, just like Lifespan can be traded, money can be traded. Addicts and desperate people exchange life for money, and rich people exchange money for life. Money is exchanged for points in an infinite cycle. This is still the most basic and more expensive, so I won't go into details. How could such a strong ability be treated like shit by you? Any normal person would be able to pass the level blindly.

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Your name looks so uncomfortable

I hope this book won't be too licking Conan. The male protagonist is on the dark side, so don't be too kind, which makes people uncomfortable.

The subject matter is quite good, but the questions are poorly written and boring to read.

Xiaolan, will those in the garden be spared?

Don't be a scumbag. It's better to write some emotional dramas and the main character really loves his wife instead of just having a desire. Just a few wives are enough, not too many.