The Steady Yellow Dragon in the Wilderness

Since I won't be able to set up a free chapter, I'll just post my thoughts here. After four months of writing, this book is finally finished. I am quite satisfied with it, at least it has passed the test. Some situations also occurred in the middle. First of all, I would like to thank everyone for staying until the end, and also for those who have always supported me. Even if it is just a flower, it is a great encouragement. There are a few people who are particularly active in the comment section, and I have remembered them all. Thank you very much. There is also a reward area. Compared with the increase in money, inner support is the greatest. Let's talk about this book again. There are a few poisonous points, but I actually don't think they are poisonous. The first one is the recruitment of Jun. This place may appeal to a large number of people, but I personally think that Jun's portrayal is just okay. He is not the kind of annoying character. Although there are not many scenes, it's just that many people can't accept Jin Wu's identity. There is also the Qi Luck Enlightenment that everyone has criticized very much. This is purely to lead to more plots. Being in one is a clone, but in the world of Xianxia or the prehistoric world, clones are inevitable. The last possibility is that there is no heroine. In this ancient world, everyone is a great god. Is it appropriate to find a heroine every day? Or do they really have the needs of both sexes when they reach that level? Not to mention the harem, even the little fairies in our world can't accept it, let alone those goddesses? This book may highlight the rationality, so to a certain extent, the excitement of the plot is sacrificed. In the end, this is the ending. It may be less than everyone expected, but there is no way. Huang Long has already achieved enlightenment. For him, any turmoil in the prehistoric times can no longer reach him. Wutian and Tathagata couldn't be stupid enough to directly cause trouble for the saint, so Huanglong's work in the prehistoric era has actually been completed, and the rest is other people's stories. If you write more, you may have to extend it, like a chaotic world, or write about Huang Long at the end, but that is meaningless. Once he is finished, he is finished. I don't know if I will meet you again in the next book, so I would like to say thank you again. Although you and I have never met, we can still be considered friends. As for the subject matter of the next book, I am still hesitant, but the style may be more cool and there will be many female protagonists, so I want to try it. But what is obsessive-compulsive is that I will still pursue a certain degree of rationality, at least logical. I will try my best to change this and take more care of the plot. Thank you all for accompanying me all the way, and thank you for your perseverance. We are destined** right**

Emulator? It's just the fantasy of a desperate author before his death.

With some logic, is it okay? Whoever can cultivate Da Luo is not the proud one of heaven. The fighting strength has collapsed

Those who say they didn't like Huang Long in the first place don't know what they think. If Zhen didn't like Huang Long, he would have become a registered disciple long ago. How could he be a direct disciple?

In Taoism, Pangu is just the incarnation of Yuanshi Tianzun. In Journey to the West, there is only the incarnation of Taishang Laojun. In Fengshen Yanyi, he is still the incarnation of Yuanshi Tianzun. Even in the prehistoric times, Buddha, the originator of the Tao, could not compare with the three pure beings after becoming a saint. ?

It's better to not watch anyone who is reborn until the time of birth, and who is reborn and seizes his body. There is no need to watch it at all.

Protagonist=Author Is the author bullied a lot in real life and not trusted? So in the novel, is it true that everyone can bully the protagonist and step on him if he is not trusted?

I didn't see anything heart-breaking, and the people who intercepted the teachings didn't look like they had been hit hard by anything. Let alone inner demons, Taoist hearts were covered in dust, etc. The shadows on their hearts were probably not as big as fingernails. At most, they would be discouraged for a while. What kind of heart-killing was this? I'm afraid I'm not tickling

Can Shi Ji not be killed? I used to think Shi Ji was very bad after watching cartoons, but later I realized that she was really miserable. I hope I can give her a better ending without killing her.

After recognizing Tianqi, who are you going to recognize next? Egg? Thanos? …

The writing is very detailed and the logic is very good. It is not as empty as many prehistoric works.

If Huang Long is the son of the ancestral dragon, tsk tsk tsk, he will probably be shrouded in the karma of the dragon and phoenix tribulations. If he wants to achieve great achievements, he can wait until he pays off the debt he owed.

The writing is not bad. If you can finish it in Feilu instead of hiring a ghostwriter to squander subscription money or eunuchs, then it is worth supporting. What is the name of the next book? As long as it is good, I will support it.

If you want to play the clone genre, you don't have to have a female protagonist. It's been so long and now there's a new poisonous point, which is likely to make this book go downhill.

Everyone else is going to be killed, but you, just let it go?

Author, your book is really similar to another book. A big star is raped. The mission reward is a building and shares in an entertainment company. Just tell me if you copied this book. The reward for a bad marriage is a building at the beginning.

I want to know what Zhou Weiguo's final outcome will be like.

Damn it, it seems like there are no women except Qin Huairu

Won't you collapse when you write about this person? Ten times the power of the Big Bang, learn about it

Dear dads, please reply to the system. We have all kinds of systems.

Do you know why there are two reviews with more than 200,000 words? Damn it if anyone subscribes to this book

The design of each character of Fulian is very detailed. Your character writing is so dramatic.

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The Renaissance the author wanted to write about? Ye Liangchen speaks like the ancients again. Various dialogues are missing. The upper and lower sentences do not match up. The dialogues between the characters are inconsistent and confusing. The writing is messy. He says that the protagonist is a time traveler. He does not know the realms of cultivating immortals yet. He says it is not time travel. Or, he also knows the system. Before the system came out, he was a little more restrained and not so literate. After the system came out, he became a second-b. He was always contemptuous and smiled evilly. Plus, you, Ye Liangchen, are revived. Are you here on this website trying to ** other people?