Pokemon: Fixing Flaws, Starting with a Hidden Ability Snorlax!

Nowadays, many God Qian stories give me an indescribable feeling. In my opinion, the so-called God Qian, isn't it very easy to improve? They all give me a feeling of difficulty in improving. In my opinion, what is God Qian? Young Gilas is born from an egg in the morning, eats at noon and directly evolves into Shakiras. Finally, after dinner, he goes to bed. When he wakes up and is in a good mood, he directly evolves into Banjiras. In my opinion, this is God's Qian, rather than everything that has reached the level and has not yet evolved.

Desert King is not as domineering and nice as Desert Tyrant

Brother, don't you know how good your data was at the beginning? Even before ten chapters were written, there were rewards and flowers. You see, the other chapters didn't even receive rewards until they were published! Stop making promises, not many people believe in scammers nowadays, take action if you want, don't be too greedy, in the end, since you asked for it, I'll give it to you! I hope you will at least write it until it is on the shelves, otherwise how can you ask us bookkeepers to give it to you?

I just hope that the protagonist's strength will not be forced to make him look like he is evenly matched with the so-called powerful younger generation. No matter how powerful he is, he can't be stronger than the protagonist's golden finger. In many elf novels, no matter how strong the protagonist is, his peers always have a reason to be as strong as him, which is exaggerated. Let me just talk about some of my personal expectations. In the harem, there should be no pretentiousness. Don't make the villain too brainless. Don't force the protagonist to become stronger. Don't give the protagonist a rich second-generation background and make him look like an ordinary person. This is actually pretty much the case now. If you have money, you give the protagonist a quasi-god who can almost be called a disability. I don't care if the protagonist's father can't see it. I also asked a few people about their elven hobbies, including Gardevoir and Menas. Although many elven stories may be annoying to some people, there are not many elves who are strong and good-looking. There are quite a few handsome ones, but I am still keen on beauty.

Don't be a eunuch, the dozens of new books on the bookshelf all belong to eunuchs.

Shuangwen, don't act like a pig and be questioned, don't have a single female protagonist, there is hope, don't have another childhood sweetheart, I'm going to vomit.

The author of Zhuzi has completed one week of the game, and some popular elves, such as Tomb Yang Dog, Family Rat, Roaring Moon, etc., Can be arranged~

The author maintains this quality and cannot lower it for faster updates.

The comment section has almost stopped moving. I don't know if it's because of the small amount. Is the author seriously ill? It's been a few days and he hasn't recovered yet. At this rate, I can only wait for it to be released first. I feel a little powerless. Also, I would like to remind you that before it is put on the shelves, I don't care if you use Elf to communicate with others. But if you go on the shelves and the number of words is so low, I won't be able to follow you. One chapter is only 8 pages, and the number of words in "Elves Talking Water" is more than one page. People who can understand the inner thoughts of elves or communicate with elves will not be able to use "Elves Talking Water**". If the protagonist can't understand it, forget it. Originally, two chapters a day are only a small amount. The number of words in "Elves Talking Water" is still quite a lot. Basically, just write the general meaning. If you say too much, it is basically a bunch of nonsense.

Can the level be faster? Just an elf. Don't train it for a year and it won't be a champion. Red will be a champion in a year. Don't have a system and a family. It's still a weakling after a year.