From Temp Worker to Police God, Leaving Crime Nowhere to Hide

The first five chapters succeeded in killing me. Damn it, can't you live without a woman? It's so fucking ridiculous. You are a police god system, and your first two tasks are actually to find women. Your well god system has a trivial relationship with women, what kind of **** novel.

It's almost ** years ago and you are still writing this kind of rz system. Is your mind filled with yellow waste?

There are many advantages and disadvantages. It feels like several styles are forcibly superimposed on each other. 1. I thought of a harem and made a mission to recruit a girl without looking at the continuity and characters. 2. As for the internal boss, it starts but ends. It's a story that can be written continuously but ends at the end. It also suppresses the line of the dark network. After all, the line of confrontation that can all be attributed to the dark network is gone. 3. Skill problem. The painting style before and after is abrupt. I wanted to learn those underworld skills in the past and had electrified fingers. I didn't follow up later. 4 Money, if there is a sudden technical problem with medical skills, do you want to save people? Make money? Let's not talk about the problem of practicing medicine, but also the problem of how to explain when to learn it later, how to make poison to save people instead, how to make money by supporting a rich wife, and the system rewards real estate leasing companies. You have chosen a painting style that completely deviates from the main line. 5. The style of painting is mixed. In terms of skills, he wants to be in a harem but has a straight male style, personal heroism and anticlimactic scenes...

Everyone pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. You are a real pig. You are purely poisonous and you are trying to hide it from the people's police**

What did you write?? Police?? I'm afraid this is not a retard, so stop writing and go to the factory to drive screws.

I can only say that I felt very uncomfortable after reading the first few chapters. This style of novel is really **

What are you writing about? The protagonist is really a loser, and the task issued by the system is to lick him hard? Damn, he's dead

My girlfriend looks like someone else

It has its bad points, but also its advantages. Let's gain some experience with the first book. The main reason is that the plot is very confusing, and it feels like a suspense drama.

Are you licking your b-face enough? Naocanauthor