The Immortal Cultivation Chronicles of Shiji

Although there were some problems with the paragraphing at the beginning, they were corrected after more than ten chapters. Although the overall performance cannot be said to be outstanding, it is still passable.

Tsk tsk tsk, author, can you make money from this book?

It doesn't look like a cool article, but you can still read it

Is it a girl's version of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality? When did you enter the prehistoric world? After thinking about it, it feels very long.

Can you read a few dozen more chapters about the person from Jianghuang and the matriarchal society? Are you a navy soldier hired by the top laner in Mongolia? Can you comment for a snack?

Your paragraph is too long. Take it apart. That's more than seven, at least a dozen.

The author can pay attention to the fragmentation of the text in the work. It is too long and the first one is **

Author, what did you post? Who says women are inferior to men? After Hongjun passed away, Nuwa became a saint, and the prehistoric era was a matriarchal society! Do you think it's a slave society?

Well, although you probably don't write books to make money. But if we simply change some minor issues, more people might see it.

Every piece you write makes me feel like reading a composition, one paragraph after another.