Artifact Refiner

In Feilu, the name is not popular.

Well written! There are minor issues with the title and layout of the book

In Feilu, your book title and chapter names are both ridiculous. I usually only read three things when reading a book: book title, introduction and table of contents. I can read both the introduction and the book title. The only difference is that the table of contents and chapter names are a bit different for me. It's very funny. You have to simplify the exciting part of this chapter and write it into a chapter title. Your name makes it look like an old novel from a few years ago.

Why do you have to prick Ma Xiaoling's eyes in a watery plot? ,, Take your time

Well written, keep it up The protagonist has a pretty good personality and is decisive in killing.

Let's break up! I can't read it after Chapter 120. The protagonist who travels back and forth through time and space is really awesome, but there is no time and space paradox. It's not interesting at all**.

Commentary on Chapter 37: Living Corpses and Dead Corpses in "The Weapon Refiner" written by Gong Changyixiao.

Commentary on Chapter 5 Haotian written by Gong Changyixiao in "The Weapon Refiner".

Commentary on Chapter 2 of "The Weapon Refiner" written by Gong Chang Yixiao: Digging a Hole and Burying Some Earth.

Looking at the title of your book, I thought there might not be a female protagonist, and the introduction mentioned a supernatural Hong Kong movie that should be a harem. I checked the catalog to see if there was a female protagonist, and I don't know if it includes all harems. If I just read the harem, it would be irrelevant to me.