Anime Crossover: Starting as Nanaya Shiki, I Join the Chat Group

Dragon Ball itself has a broken combat power system. If you add chat**, the power system will be completely unreadable. Then add Demon Slayer Blow, Devil's Forbidden Blow and the like, so just wait for it to be criticized. Of course, it may collapse if you can't write it.

The protagonist is reborn several times. Arrogant and disrespectful. Arrogant and ignorant. I feel so old. Others don't owe her anything. That's the tone. This look. How stupid. Far worse than Shining Gold.

Originally it was pretty good, but I keep writing about Accelerated World. Why don't you just travel directly to Accelerated World? This is Dragon Ball. The main world is Dragon Ball and you don't write about Accelerated World well. It's boring.

The protagonist is a junior in an accelerated world. Is this Tian Gou?

Sister Qishi's talent is really abnormal. Chengdu is feared by the world. He gave Yiyi a curse and then created eyes that suppressed his talent.

It is recommended to get a Saint Seiya. Dragon Ball's high attack is low and others are low, and it is currently the strongest single. Microcosm can cultivate to multiple dimensions and is very comprehensive. Microcosm can protect the soul. Unless it is physically broken, there is no use like curse magic. It can also create various super powers. It can be said that Microcosm is a hexagonal warrior with no weaknesses. Unless it is stronger than him, no one weaker than him can be hurt at all.

Why don't you post so many pictures of Seraph? Otherwise, don't post irrelevant pictures.

I was deceived by the title. It's a pity that most of them are about Dragon Ball.

Be direct. Just practice writing more. I'll be chasing the next one. Harmful.

The writing feels like a novice's Accelerating World is too long The description of Dragon Ball does not include specific fighting and combat prowess, etc. This is probably because of the poor writing style. The writing about traveling through the world and time and space is also very messy. Well, it's also a matter of writing style. There is also a big problem with the plot. Can't Piccolo, who has more than a thousand combat power, feel the fighting power of the Namekians with tens of millions of combat power? Still staring at Wukong, very speechless Anyway, it was very uncomfortable to read, and it felt like a narrative. The summary is good, but the writing style is too good.