Siheyuan, Deputy Factory Director Li, Knows How to Start the Game

I'm quite puzzled that so many women insist on having a relationship with Qin Huairu

I'd better forget about this heroine. The writing is a bit awkward. You're not saying it's not good, but it's just a bit stiff.

Not to mention attributes, an attack of less than 100 and a defense of 800 can do 60 damage, and the level is sometimes level 6, sometimes level 8. Take a good look at it for yourself. You have to be more rigorous when writing online game novels. You just write a sketch just for fun, write attributes randomly, change levels, and how will people see it? The subject matter can be written like this

The part about the Undocumented Knight was pretty good before, it was where the tornado appeared! In the original work, the funding warrior takes action first, and then Saitama-sensei appears last! Your plot has changed too much. Then, can you give the protagonist an ability? ? Any ability to protect yourself will do! For example, the swordsmanship of Gale Swordsman, a fight with the King of the Deep Sea, and a six-six-six score from his friends! Then I didn't understand the part about the tornado... Saitama didn't appear either... It's uncomfortable...

Can't the transplanted Sharingan be turned off?

Even the names of the protagonists are changed. Is it interesting?

So what about the thing that keeps shouting push push push? Don't even look at the intensity of the crackdown now.

都世界无敌了，还跟着下忍做忍者游戏，

当我看到简介里的最后一句话时，我真想说没有个十年脑血栓，父母双亡，妻离子散都想不出来这样写。

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It's a good start, keep it up. The most important thing is not to be a eunuch. Maintain the standard and keep writing

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