
I Arrived in Konoha, So Why Am I Turning into Buer to Rewrite the Plot?
来到木叶,让我变巴尔篡改剧情?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 124k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
79Chapters
982.8kReads
5.5kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 23
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The system asked the pig's feet to rob Naruto's fish. Anyone who has watched Naruto will not accept Naruto. As a result, the pig's feet went away, and no one else in the village came close to Naruto. The third generation did not directly kill the protagonist, or directly arrest him and search for his soul and memory. It's all a bit unreasonable. Just think about it. Naruto equals the tailed beast equals the nuclear bomb. No matter if you are a spy from another organization or you are approaching Naruto unnecessarily I won't care about you and arrest you directly. I'll do a soul search first. If there's no problem, I'll do a brainwashing next.
The author gives an opinion The subject matter is quite good. You said that a man turned into a woman, so you could write about Lily, but you let Naruto see this thing, and you didn't let Naruto use the seduction technique to transform into the main character's **. To be honest, your writing is a bit biased towards, changing marriage, which is a bit unacceptable. Bass, as long as you are a normal person , imagine that you are a grown man and become a woman, and then you have to get married. Unless he is gay, you don't change this book. For example, if you are seen by a woman while taking a shower, it is not a big problem. After all, you have become a woman, and you are seen by Naruto, isn't it? Don't you feel panicked? I saw them all, and felt disgusted. I kept them for now, and didn't change them later. I just fucked them up.
The author Gou wrote more and more strangely, and he actually wrote that Danzo actually wanted to kill Kyuubi. Haven't you watched Naruto?
Author, is this a lily or a remarry?
The protagonist is indeed aggrieved, and is bound to a system that is self-aware and whose status is obviously higher than that of the host. I am not against the system being self-aware and being able to overwhelm the protagonist. Let's first figure out what the host means... It is obvious that the author is not very good at emotional dramas, so the subject we chose... Male to female is nothing more than tea, cheating on feelings, and cheating on things, but we didn't see much of this. You can see it by referring to the third generation specifically. The author is also aware of the problem of the protagonist. The protagonist beats others violently just to regain some status, but that is not enough at all. The key is. This protagonist should not say that things go smoothly, but at least he can have a dominant position. He is too passive, and his dominance cannot be effective, so he is naturally criticized by many people. Feilu itself has a fast-food nature. After writing about 70 or 80 chapters, the readers will be fixed. We don't ask for anything. We just want to have a little fun and have fun, and then live our lives how we want. This request... Isn't too much?
There are very few people who like male-to-female stories, but there are a lot of people who like pseudo-male stories.
Don't curse or make personal attacks!
Thor is a twin demon god, his elder sister is Baal, also known as Thunderbolt Shin, and his younger sister is Balzebra, so are you writing about the older sister or younger sister? And don't make the protagonist feel so aggrieved. The system is not here to be a father, but to assist.
Baalzebul, I have become a god
I originally thought it was okay, but it was too frustrating and I didn't really like watching it.