
Mixed Martial Arts: I Am the Villain, and I Will Accept Tong Lao at the Beginning
综武:我反派,开局收童姥
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- Completed
- Length
- 416k Words
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Cultivation
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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I'm very surprised. I only have moves but no internal strength or strong physical strength. What's the difference between me and ordinary people? The day after tomorrow depends on physical fitness, endurance and strength, and the speed of reaction. The day after tomorrow depends on the internal energy and external energy to hurt people. To put it bluntly, the day after tomorrow depends on physical collision or the collision of swords. But the day after tomorrow depends on the sword energy and boxing energy, so you are still an ordinary person who only knows the moves. Unless the protagonist has good physical fitness and can bear a thousand pounds, he cannot be a first-rate opponent.
The author's writing is good. The only thing that needs improvement is the author's writing style and sentence construction. It has only reached a fluent state at present. There is still room for improvement before returning to nature and natural freehand brushwork. As long as the author persists, he has the potential to enter the hot list. However, the author should pay attention to the votes, the title of the book, and the introduction. These three points also account for a large proportion of a successful book. Yours I think the literary talent of the story in this book is better than most of the hot lists. However, the three aspects of asking for votes, book title, and introduction are not enough, so that your book is buried and the first order is not ideal. It is recommended that the author and the editor discuss modifying these three points and re-issuing the book. Also, keep writing. The word count of old books is one of the key points of the hot list. With your first-class literary talent, pay attention to the above four points and it will become popular.