Republican Era: Starting My Sign-In in Bailu Village

Is your system good at point B? You have to rely on yourself for everything. It's so useless.

The protagonist is too young. Although time travel is easy to do, can you quickly skip the part where the protagonist is young? It looks very awkward. Just push the timeline back seven, eight or ten years. Just summarize it in the early preparations, which is too cumbersome.

It's a fault that I'm too young, I'm only five years old

The problem with your protagonist's setting is that he is only 5 years old. If you were older and had returned from studying abroad, your basic logic would be much better. The more I see this situation now, the more I want to complain.

But your protagonist system is not good, every definition. What does the protagonist want to do? Being a warlord, a rich man, or something else... The reward is also some money. You can see how feudal it is in Bailuyuan. It's a good thing that I didn't roast you when you were five years old.

If you use too much chemical fertilizer, the fields will be ruined.

If it's not appropriate to do this, you can wait until you are older to do it. Wouldn't it be better to reward individuals for the protagonist to use?

You should not write about bald relatives in this book. Your book is a relative of Li Yunlong. Li Yunlong is your uncle. I'm tired of these routines.

The protagonist doesn't even have any soldiers. How can you defend a fertilizer factory and a cement factory? What era? How can you run a fertilizer factory in modern times without any thugs or official background? Does the author know what raw materials chemical fertilizers are made of? I don't know if I can fly Lu! How can the male protagonist become a warlord if he doesn't want to?

It's pretty good. It would be even better if the main character practiced martial arts.