Anime Crossover: I Wrote Fanfiction, and the Heroines Came Knocking

I always like to write somewhere else. For example, tonight I went to eat fish with Kaguya. You will explain why you did what you did tonight, why Kaguya did what you did, where the fish came from, and how you cooked it. I always like to write a big recommendation on these meaningless things! It is a very simple sentence, but you always simplify it and simplify it.

Most of the female protagonists described in this book are male protagonists, so don't worry.

But it's too long-winded, the worst part is that it's too watery, and the process is too slow.

After reading a few pictures, the problem with the previous book came here again. I kept repeating for half a picture, "You are better than the Pacific Ocean. How can you get people to subscribe to it like this?" It's not that you can't say it, but is it too much for you to just say half of it? Keep it simple, keep talking about it, if one thing can solve the problem, you can talk about two or three

Chapter 9: I'm so embarrassed. You have to shout out when you punch, right? It's hard to hold back when you punch seriously.

The ability is a bit one-dimensional and not very exciting. The most important thing is not to rub like this all the time, just push when it's time to push.

I don't like that work and want to leave after seeing it. The main reasons are the patch and the younger brother. Everyone knows the younger brother, and there are ghosts. Ghosts take advantage of so many people. Even if you can keep your reputation, can you keep other female characters? Haha, as long as there are ghosts and no patches, we will definitely not be able to defend it.

Let's put aside the long-winded psychological description for now. The plot direction that the protagonist makes after finishing his brainstorming is particularly awkward. This is equivalent to making you eat three large bowls of clear noodle soup without salt or seasoning, and then stuffing you with a rotten apple. Do current readers like this style? I really can't understand it.

Is it the kind of harem that takes place in hundreds of chapters? . . .

The book I thought I had written before I clicked on it has been printed and sold, but in fact only the heroine has seen it; I personally don't mind long descriptions of details, as long as the daily plot volume can be guaranteed, but the update speed is really slow now; my sister Nayuta has benefits from time to time, but the initiative is always in her hands. At this stage, the protagonist who is thousands of times stronger still cannot find out how to pretend to sleep... Although in recent years Zhang applied a super power patch, and the result is that she is positioned more like the sister character who has been chatting with people in recent years; for the heroine, unless the incident is so serious that she can see it with her own eyes, the protagonist will not reveal the existence of the evil spirits. It can be said that the contact time with them is too short and she will not communicate with them, but the plot is compressed ↓Interacting with the sister in the middle of the night to upgrade the level, chasing the cat into the Shinomiya house to avoid the search, and interacting with Yukino to send Yukino home ↑It happened in the same midnight...