Gundam Travels Through the World of Machine Combat Starting from Seeds

Writing a protagonist in Feilu and pulling CP? No wonder the grades are so bad

I took a quick look at it and browsed through the comment section. It took about an hour or two in total. **Actually and in the comments section, this book is quite annoying in our current opinion. The protagonist seems to have engaged in pimping, but it seems that he did not give it away in the end, but this cannot change the reaction to the previous behavior. Also, I personally don't have much affection for protagonists who are too frivolous. After all, when we read fan fiction, we must be thinking about the harem. So the question is, if we have a lot of beautiful wives, why would we look for ordinary goods from outside? If we really want to keep them, of course we still have a damn strong possessiveness, such as cn complex, not to mention the fan fiction, so we hope that the author will change the settings or cut off the characters. Finally, there is the mission that we specially went to see. Good guy, tens of millions of people were directly poisoned, right? In our opinion, decisive killing does not mean killing innocent people indiscriminately. You are directly against humanity. In fact, we have already reached our limit if we do not save anyone. Killing innocent people indiscriminately is really hard to bear.

In the first half, the author blindly caters to the main plot. He is timid in fighting. He doesn't want to kill and he doesn't want to kill. Are you writing a fanfic or copying the plot? When you write a fanfic, you don't care about the main plot. Just kill him if you want. This is your book, your protagonist. You write your protagonist like a tool man, moving wherever needed, like NC. So what happened to the four little heroes? You can't continue writing without them, and you can't create your own villain? Do you have to cater to the original work? If I follow the main storyline while watching fan fiction and don't dare to kill this one, I might as well just go watch the anime. Why else should I watch the fan fiction?

Thank you for your blessings, and I hope everyone is happy and happy!

I really want a harem, but now I'm afraid to watch it because I'm afraid that the male protagonist will let down the other two girls.

The Vajura Zerg have existed for hundreds of millions of years, and their numbers can be said to be spread all over the universe. They are existences that even primitive civilizations and fleets dare not provoke. What you wrote is so weak. The protagonist's character is completely darkened.

Is the author licking*? Travel back to ancient times and still lick? You must be sick, one has a system. Modern time travels back to ancient times. There are 600,000 soldiers and more than 100 million taels of silver. In ancient times, there were guns and cannons. He was still a prince and had a personal fief. He actually swore not to take concubines to a woman he met once and dismissed all the women in the fief. , Even if you say that we are childhood sweethearts, I will not scold you. The main character still practices the Yellow Emperor's Heart Sutra. You have succeeded in seducing me. If I don't scold you, I really don't understand my anger. I have been reading books for more than ten years and you are the first one to make me have murderous intentions. You deserve to be damned if you step on a horse!!!

A dimensionality-reduction strike-level weapon used by Zigang to kill the protagonist group.

MDZZ, he actually gave it to his girlfriend, who is still his adopted sister who is not related by blood! Too arrogant

The Niu Zeon of the hgdf series, the Zeon number modified by Niu Gao, this thing is definitely fun to plug into the UC

Do you authors know how to do Tai Chi? There are 9 out of 10 authors who write, and one is Baji Beng. I'm really speechless.

You have people with systems who put their special planes outside, so that they can be taken out and used at any time without leaving them in the system space. Repairs can also be done by the system. If I were the enemy and the protagonist was so strong, why would I just join forces and use all the most powerful weapons to kill the protagonist?

There are many magic weapons in the ancient world, such as the innate treasure Tai Chi Diagram, Pangu Fan, Hun Zhong, the Xuan Huang Exquisite Pagoda of Heaven and Earth, and so on.

The only problem is that the content is too short and the pace of each world is too fast, especially the 00 world, which adds up to less than 100 chapters. I hope the pace will be slower in the future, and each world should preferably have more than 100 chapters.

It's over, is there a Gundam book next? I want to see Jiaoda go to the orthodox world after his transformation, such as creating the Assault and Assault* heads

After watching the second season of 00, I can only say that the author has no understanding of the plot and is still making it up. The phantom particles in the ce world can be said to be the foundation. Things that have been around since Thunder are said to be dssd. The mirage will fail due to overheating. How dare you drive the thruster justice backpack? It should use gas injection to achieve stealth action. An anti-ship sword cannot penetrate the duel PS armor, which requires an impact of about two to three hundred G. Malu is a technical officer herself. She was responsible for the invention of the PS armor, and her fiancé should have been a MA pilot. He died long ago, leaving only the photo in a pendant that she carries with her. Of course, the character can be re-designed, but basic physics cannot be made up.

Wow, it's been so long since I've seen it before I'm like this. You Jiba is too short, isn't it?

I thought it was okay when I first read it, but then it became silly. I felt like it was written by a person no more than 10 years old.

I came to see it for Ghost Rider. What did the author write? Ghost Rider is the incarnation of the spirit of vengeance. It's something from the West. What are you trying to do to get close to the Eyes of a Thousand Buddhas? What is that? Where did you get it? The Buddhist eye lines are not right. You rarely go to watch movies and comics and then write about Ghost Rider. I don't know what you are writing at the beginning. Nine**

I'm speechless. The plot is so patchwork and confusing.

Since I went to Gundam SEED and didn't accept the witch girl, what's the point of your book? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Not even interested in watching it! ! !

It's just for show, don't take it seriously if it makes sense or not.

Chapter 122: The ceremony begins, the flaming phoenix crows, and Xia Ming opens "The Phoenix Returns to the Nest" (please subscribe) Chapter 122 written by Jiao Shi Tiantian.

This was because Xu Miaoyun couldn't tell his identity. When she saw the protagonist marrying a concubine, she made sarcastic remarks and teased the protagonist. During the bridal chamber, I had to make three promises to the protagonist, but after a few days I couldn't stand it anymore, and then told my sister that she would have to agree to take concubines in the future, and then the protagonist would have to report everything to her. Damn, this is marrying a daughter-in-law and a father. Tang He wanted to marry his daughter to Xiao Qie, the protagonist, and made some sarcastic remarks. He was heartbroken when he saw her, and thought she was the daughter of Xu Da, Duke of Xu. Put on airs and give her face

I just like this kind of book, it's very imaginative and logical, but the pace is a bit slow.

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Commentary on Chapter 52: The Formation of Old and New Forces, "Fengshen: Became King Zhou's Minister of Finance" written by Space Starlight.

Author, are you unable to continue writing?

Let's talk about it. Come on, Mu'ap is hot. Carter Club. Patrick Belala. Go to TVB. Otherwise, it's poisonous. Hot and spicy. Asatru rubs the color picture. Tetu makes up for the fever. Kallet's ax. Oh, he, the butcher is hungry. He's not.

Turtle Man writing is also a field, I don't know how many there are. Anyway, I came to Feilu just to see me, not to see cuckold writing.