Naruto: Hand Seals? Don't I Just Shout and Get Whatever I Want?

Can you be more rigorous? A lot of complaints. Are you Yun Hokage?

Really, you should really get to know Naruto well when you write this. Hizashi and Nizashi are only one year older than Minato. Also, the immortal body is stronger than Hashirama. The immortal body has all seven attributes. The immortal body is Hagoromo's constitution. Asura inherits it. With the immortal body, Indra inherited the immortal eyes. As long as the protagonist gets the Uchiha bloodline, he can easily open the Sharingan and the Rinnegan. You have a Hashirama constitution in addition. I feel that there is no need to use so many ninjutsu when writing, Mu I learned all the methods of escape, the Rasengan is a non-attribute ninjutsu, the Flying Thunder God one, the wind release learned the wind cutter, vacuum bomb, vacuum wave, the water release learned the water dragon bite blast, water formation wall, water dragon bomb, water breaking wave, hard vortex water blade, and the earth release learned the redundant ones. If you use Fire Release, you can use Go Fire to extinguish it, and Go Fire is gone. For Thunder Release, just use a Raikiri. Raikiri is a silent Chidori that can fly with the Rasengan. You can use the Sharingan to devour, which can devour other people's eyes. You can use illusions and swordsmanship to become invincible.

You feel so greasy after writing.

Although there are more beauties in Konoha, I think that's why they all have to go out from Konoha. There are a few sleeping dragons and phoenixes like Muye F4. The fat man feels super speechless all day long, or he is procrastinating, and instead of directly solving the four of them at once, doing those little tricks behind the scenes, they already have golden fingers, so why are they still in Konoha? It would be better to go directly to Iwagakure or Kumogakure. If you are capable in these two villages, they will definitely train you. In Konoha, there are too many trivial matters.

There are too many shortcomings. For example, if the Flying Thunder God is maxed out, why are you still doing the second level? Shouldn't it be extended level penetration if it's already maxed out? There is also the Immortal Human Body. Only the Otsutsuki clan has the maxed-out version. If you get a Hashirama Physique, it will be maxed out in the Analogous Wood Release and all other attributes. Otherwise, what would you call the Immortal Human Body? The writing is not that good, and the plot is written in such a way that regardless of the character's appearance time or other messy things, you will have to wield a knife if your grades are too low after it is released.

It's better to write your composition

Too many narrations, too many introductions, too much nonsense

Come on, why don't we have Tom Uchiha and Jerry Senju!

What the hell are you writing, I feel like sleeping after reading it

There's a lot of nonsense, too much