Tomb Raiding: Starting at Kunlun Shrine, Playing the Little Brother

The character of the little brother is not even written out! Sometimes he is taciturn, and sometimes he is talkative.

I have never been to the grave. It smells earthy. Genetics

I think most of the people who read this book are here to play the little brother, but the author's writing is too lame.

Is this what I do?

If you don't know how to write about acting, don't write about it. Isn't it good for you to write about the inheritance of the little brother? If you have to embarrass yourself, if no one reads your book or if everyone criticizes you, you deserve it.

If you don't know how to write, don't write. Your little brother has this character.

This author's writing is not good. He doesn't know how to talk so much. The protagonist is talkative at one time and silent at the other. Moreover, he can't explain it so clearly. He talks so much, and only 5.8% Rewards him with his physique, black gold ancient sword and unicorn bloodline. So what will you reward later? The author can't just write what he thinks? I haven't even thought about how to write it later.

Where does the earthy smell come from if you haven't fought before? Could it be that even the smell can be played out? And the state of playing the role of the younger brother is unstable. One moment he talks too much, and the next moment he becomes taciturn.

For example, the movie star suddenly got on top and started to act smart.

I can't describe Zhang Qilin's amazing feeling. He saved Shirley Yang and acted like nothing happened without saying thank you? Those who are good at writing are willing to marry each other. Acting is not about living like someone else. Acting through time travel is for strength.