
Age of Elves: I Used My Handheld to Start Flashing
精灵时代:我用掌机开始刷闪
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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15.3MReads
920.2kFlowers
17.0 · 75.8kScore
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I'm Asking for Fairy Tales, No Fucking Slaps in the Face, No Brainless Villains, No School Sweethearts, and No Mythical Beasts in the Early Stages.
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I forgot about everything before, but you are still feeding me shit. The female Elledo really has yours. Are you crazy or am I crazy? Sister Huan Sa, I think you are a good character, with combat power, mythical beasts, plot, proportion, everything I can do, but if you give me four times the entire super power to restrain Ghost Stone, and the female evolved Eluledor, I really can't help it, at least let's see if Shen Bai can do it?
The more you go back, the more speechless you get. The protagonist has a golden finger and he levels up every day in the game. He even defeated the red flame pine. However, a teacher who is not the main elf beat the protagonist's entire main lineup. It made me laugh. You got a golden finger and you are lonely. After maxing out the level in the game every day, the result is only slightly better than your classmates. If you pick any young teacher in real life, he can beat the protagonist without swiping. He has not touched any mythical beasts. The red flame pine is level 50, and the real teacher is level 90. Just like this, this **teacher** is still facing the illusion of the red flame pine. Do you want to look back and see what you are writing?
Can you check the information carefully? Don't think that it comes out one after another. I have been enduring that wave of missiles for a long time. I really can't stand seeing the female Eluredor.
At present, the full level is still 100, so the issue of combat power is the biggest problem of this article. First of all, the level of the protagonist is already very high. The promotion in the game is too fast, which leads to the disconnection between combat power and identity in reality. The freshman has gym level combat power, so it is necessary to restrict the protagonist from killing randomly, otherwise the reality will not be written. So, just like the junior breeder exam, the old one just wants to tell you that the protagonist is not invincible, but what's the use? The combat power of this book has collapsed. The proportion of game plot is too high, and the actual content is not written at all. After all, the game is played with flash to show off, but the result is that the combat power game is seriously inconsistent with the plot, and the protagonist is not far away from level 80 or 90. By then, the author will either be unfinished or complete a 250-level lousy job. I have seen this kind of thing too many times. In short, the writing power is not enough, the combat power system is completely broken, and the proportion of real-life plot in the game is completely out of touch. This is the most fatal problem of this article.
Seeing how Goldfinger affects reality, I don't want to watch it anymore. Just saw it here. It's boring later. I hope I can find an elf novel where cheats won't affect reality!
This book is one of the few that I have almost finished in Feilu. It has some minor flaws, but it doesn't matter. Personally, I don't think it has major flaws. It just got a bit boring after more than 500 chapters.
The protagonist already has super powers, but he is still afraid of revealing his super powers and whether he is sick. It would be fine if the protagonist is weak, but your damn protagonist is almost the same as Iron Man, and he is still secretive and sick. Is the world of the protagonist as powerful as the Marvel world? Or is the protagonist's nemesis as powerful as Thanos? Once you reveal your superpowers at the beginning, will the heroine's mother look down on you and worry about the heroine becoming a widow? Or do you want to make money with a low word count? Haha, it's really a waste of money. As long as you write the plot well and don't refuse to subscribe, is it interesting to forcefully pretend to slap the number of words in your face? I just can't stand it, author.
It's getting more and more outrageous. You like Gardevoir so much and don't understand it clearly? Eluredo is only male, and only males can use the Awakening Stone to evolve into Eluredo.
How to get a Shining Tooth? For the protagonist, it only takes some time to get a Shining Elf, and you have to have outstanding individual values to join a team. If it is easy to get it, then it would be okay, but having to do in-school ranking competitions or trade with professors and other troublesome things is completely unnecessary for the protagonist. If you have this time, you can get one of the Shining Quasi Gods.
The biggest poisonous point of this book is that it confuses reality with games. It's basically about playing games. Can't I play it myself? I wrote the game as the main character and reality as the secondary character. It was basically all about playing the game, and there were too many elves. To be honest, I only remembered a few elves from the beginning, and forgot all the others. It was baffling to see an elf suddenly come out.
After I read it, I read thirty chapters and talked about my feelings. The setting of this book is well written, which is rare. Compared with other books, it is very rigorous, and the original and modified settings are also very interesting. It can be seen that the author has worked hard in this aspect. Also, this author is not very knowledgeable. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. There are relatively few descriptions of the emotional bond with Pokémon. 2. The main plot progresses slowly, and there are few original characters appearing. Based on comprehensive judgment, the author may not be good at writing plots or the outline may not be well written. Suggestions: When you see it is about to be released, consider whether to pay or not. If you think it is worth it, then buy it.
Idiom Solitaire! True to its name!
Money is interconnected with the real world, and things can be taken out. If you don't want to be a bad guy, why don't you go to the game to pick up coins and make money? For emeralds, if you just speedrun and go to the bottom of the sea to steal fragments and exchange them for evolution stones, you won't earn more. It's just 20 times the experience. Watch me clear the super gym in a week.
What I wrote before is okay, but recently I became a gym leader and started selling elves? ? ? ? A 2v round shark 3 billion,,,6 took off and was planted. It's not like other excellent elf novels don't make money by selling things, but what they sell is materials, evolution stones and the like. As a result, you have become an elf dealer. And they sell it as a shoddy product at a high price, which is incredible. Looking at the previous article, I thought it was a rare and excellent elf text in Fei Luli, but it turned out to be like this.
. . . . The visual sense is a bit strong, as if there is a book of Golden Finger
The author should be more clear-headed. In this period, as long as the cavalry is there, they are better than Guan Ning's cavalry! What's the use of 20,000 pieces of trash that's used to running around?
Bring the main body of the heroes in and let the enemy experience the malice of greater strength in numbers.
I'm not the author. You have to take responsibility for accepting it. Looking at your strategy for Ye Yixin, I always feel like you're treating her as a tool. Maybe I didn't read enough.
The fighter in front of me dares to dismount and fight (funny)
The introduction directly feeds poison, good guy, this is the first time I've seen such an introduction.
Call the author Call the author Will there be a single heroine in the future? Please answer. If it is not convenient for you to answer, please reply to me and let me know that you have seen my comment. Thank you (*°?°)=3
Can the fruit of attraction and repulsion serve as a pawn for Jack?
Do you know the concept of 100 times? The protagonist fired 100 times only to be kicked away? Nothing's wrong with him
Is Ye Zhiqiu evil and upright? Ha ha
I've kept it in the collection area for a long time, why haven't I gone back to take revenge?
Nowadays, authors who write martial arts fan fiction like to write mixed martial arts hodgepodges
About Chapter 017 of "The King: Chased by the Empress at the Beginning" written by Da Mi Xiong: Xi Shi and Shi Yiguang! Please collectChapter review.
I really want to read it, but I really have no choice but to make an initial reservation.
Either it was ghostwritten or mdzz said that the universe is still pretending to be on earth and there are so many chapters. The most speechless thing is that someone who can be president can be so mentally retarded? Forget it, the president of Country M is not doing well. All orders must be voted on by members of the assembly. I didn't see any members during the whole process.
The protagonist now has people like Yabo who have the ability to develop technology and transform monsters. The cosmonauts can directly repair and transform the remains of Dark Lops and Dark Zaki into machine monsters. At the same time, they can also let them be responsible for transforming and upgrading the machine monsters and super beasts under their control.