Showbiz: Starting with Heartbeat House 5

You moved it here completely based on the variety show.

Most of the people who watch romance dramas probably watch the male and female protagonists running towards each other and then eat sweets while watching the sweet love. Now, if the protagonist doesn't take the initiative or refuse, he's not a scumbag. If the heroine is Jin who hasn't appeared yet, then I can understand a little bit, but if you don't speed up the process and let the fourth heroine appear, why, won't the heroine not appear if you don't release it?

It's better to watch variety shows directly, since you're just copying them anyway.

So you copied the variety show directly, even if it was written by you?

Such a useless author, just copying others

You can write three chapters for one lyric, you are awesome

How should I put it? This male protagonist is equivalent to Zhang Yuan, including the dialogues, they are exactly the same. I know everything that follows, and there is no sense of immersion at all.

It is best not to write the male protagonist's body like Zhang and Xue like this. In terms of plot, it is best not to copy the variety show completely. It is better to watch the variety show directly. You can write according to the flow of the variety show and add something sweet according to the author's idea. As for the female protagonist, my personal suggestion is Belle, after all, now the taro balls C P is quite popular. As for the plot of the female protagonist, you can send a minidate to the male protagonist first if you feel anxious because the male protagonist interacts a lot with other guests. Then the male protagonist will be moved by the female protagonist, and then write more sweet things about the interaction between the male and female protagonists. This is the suggestion. I hope the author will adopt it.

You are copying. What you write here is directly about eating more vegetables. If you can't write this, just forget it. You don't have to do this, right?

A few chapters passed like this. It's waterier than the sea. I couldn't understand it even if I copied it from a variety show.