Too Afraid to Go on Adventures, I Can Only Run a Pokémon Nursery

I really like this kind of novel, but the writing is really bad.

I only looked at the front part. Firstly, I didn't have much sense of involvement. It was like a composition. Secondly, the segmentation was a bit poor and I looked very tired.

Since it is a breeding house, the main plot must be how to evolve Pokémon. Let's read more novels about the beast-control genre.

This paragraph of yours has seven or eight lines. It looks very tiring. Can you divide it into a few more paragraphs?

A few questions. The first is that the beginning is the same as that of a primary school student's composition. The second is that it is not divided into paragraphs. It is too tiring to read it in large sections.

Brother, please divide it into segments, otherwise no one will see it.

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