Kiana from the Start: Livestreaming the Rescue of Honkai Blades

What are you writing about? Oh my god! He keeps saying that he wants to get the love of the Valkyries, but he doesn't even want to tell them the truth. Also opened a harem. Is that kind of love still real love? Price, this is a novel with a modern setting and a harem. What kind of emotional drama is this? Especially the first time I met the protagonist Kiana. This is written. He is not stupid. I can't write better, can I?

Friends, the author didn't expect that his roommate was also my reader, so in order to make the author more updated, he directly gave me a love education, but he didn't win me over.

It's not like there's no story at all

If writing it once is not enough, you have to write it twice or three times. Just like the inexplicable stranger who comes up to talk to your wife and teases her the first time he sees you. This is a disease of yours and needs to be cured. . .

I wanted to write some emotional stories, and instead of meeting someone who has a domineering aura, I wanted to write about a girl who is similar to the original novel, rather than a heroine with a broken personality. I wanted a heroine from Honkai Impact III, not a heroine who was directly conquered by the protagonist's overbearing aura. Also, I wrote it for the Honkai Knife, so it might be a bit of a hit, but Please bear with me, and the plot behind the pretentious slap in the face is not surprising, there are very few or even none of it. The author is writing a book for the second time, and his experience is not enough, so he may make some mistakes. The author hereby apologizes to all the friends who support the author. The author's writing style cannot be compared with those of the big guys, but he should be able to get rid of his pure Yang body before it is put on the shelves.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that there are many areas for improvement. Firstly, I feel that there are too many plots of pretending to slap passersby in the face, which is a bit embarrassing. Secondly, maybe the author does not know much about live broadcasts. After reading the author's Kiana live broadcast, even I, who do not watch live broadcasts, feel there is something wrong. Thirdly, why is the protagonist not in a hurry to improve his strength and quickly draw a few powerful abilities, but instead spends his daily life there leisurely?

It looked awkward at first. How old is the protagonist? It looks very childish!

It makes me laugh to death, relying on your wife's live broadcast to support yourself.

This kind of slap-in-the-face plot is really unnecessary. If you write it well, it doesn't matter. If you write it poorly, I'll just feel embarrassed. If it's well-written, it's refreshing to watch. If it's poorly-written, it'll feel aggrieved. I already dislike this kind of plot. Even though it's a novel, it has a slap-in-the-face plot. But you also have to consider reality. What century has it been? If you walk on the street, there is no chance that you will encounter this kind of thing. Even if it does, the probability is extremely small. If you add such superfluous features, you will not be able to write well. It will only make people feel that the plot is awkward and there is no need to continue reading.

It's a pity that I can't watch these live broadcasts