Star Trek: Activate the Galactic System from the Start

Brothers, who is the heroine?

See what I found?

It's noisy and not smooth to read. I suggest the author read more about the writing, and don't describe the side plots in a larger length than the main plot. It's very stressful. In addition, the male protagonist hopes to have human rights, just like a scoundrel, and there is no highlight at all.

Commentary on the chapter "Star Travels: Activate the Galaxy System at the Beginning" written by Zixiu. Chapter 1: Traveling through, Activating the Galaxy System.

No matter good or bad, I support you. You must finish writing. Thank you.

It's rare to see any Star Travels fans