Tomb Robbery: Zhang Family Qilin, Starting with the Body of the God of War

After reading it, I almost finished it before it was put on the shelves. I would like to share my opinion here. I am confused. You have written so many novels in Feilu. Why do you still set the characters in those chats to the end of the plot? Even when the plot has ended, can't you set it to the beginning of the plot? Forget it, this book has nothing to do with me. I hope you can improve it next time.

I won't talk about the team formation in the game. In reality, there are so many dragsters looking for death. It's so dangerous and you have to protect a weak woman. It's sick. I won't watch it if there is a female protagonist. It's boring. I'll get drunk when I see Su Xiaoxi. Bitch.

It's so bad. It's only been so bad for a few chapters now, but it will get worse later on.

Remember to beat Sun Wuhan, the master of time and space, to let him know the importance of strength and not to become Nobihan.

It's better not to have a female protagonist. Some novels have female protagonists. Can the protagonist be more serious? The protagonist is also the leader of a force. At least he should be more serious. He can't walk when he sees a woman.

Have you ever heard that in the Qin Dynasty, if you don't die at 60, you will be buried alive?

What about the system? Are there no rewards for killing monsters? You won't let the protagonist just hold two belts until the end of the fight, right? There is no positive feedback at all when fighting monsters, and there is no explanation as to why the protagonist works so diligently to fight monsters.

Shinichi and Honesty are fine, Holmes and Watson are operations that I have never thought of. Heiji should not compete with Shinichi for Honesty. He has a few policemen. If he is not a policeman, he can be given a shota, such as Bourbon, Gin, Akai, and other characters. Kyogoku Shin is also fine. Give this kind of character a shot and become a shota. Heiji can pick it up and become his partner.

People who have never been married or in love don't dare to watch this. It's too uncomfortable (;_;)

Low energy, reduced intelligence, three incorrect views

Regardless of whether it looks good or not, at least there shouldn't be so many typos.

It's very interesting, it's updated quickly, the character of the protagonist is also good, the atmosphere among the colleagues around me is very good, and the abilities of the team members complement each other, come on!

Five thousand became two thousand in just two sentences?

Allen has always been too dramatic.

I'm convinced. After reading so much, I always accept Ren Tingting. I've never seen a woman before.

All zombies are golden-armored zombies. That's outrageous.

I found that the author's choice of women was toxic. Miss, it was indeed possible before plastic surgery, but now? Haha. Although Miss in the book was before plastic surgery, I feel quite uncomfortable when I think of Miss now. Then Yang Mi, this woman who has been fucked by countless protagonists in Feilu, has not had any works in the past few years. Now I have a headache when I see Yang Mi in Feilu, and I can't understand why people are still writing about her. There are so many young stars. Just find one, even if your reputation is low. If you post a picture, the LSPs will definitely agree. You have to have someone who writes in Feilu. In my opinion, this is asking for death. At first it felt like it was okay, but after reading the latest chapter, it really started to become a bit vulgar. Shenhao pretended to be good at writing and didn't know how to "study". I hope Yang Mi can be replaced. It's not like there aren't any good-looking new generation people. Do we have to find someone in their thirties or forties? Never make a routine too old. That's it, if you can listen, I'll continue watching.

Author: Do you know this book?

Brother, why are there so many typos in your book?

Your profile is embarrassing for me, right?

I don't have a ghostwriter. Why don't you say anything, author?

Too much nonsense, I won't read anymore.

After meeting Hu Tao, Hu Tao ran around carrying the coffin, trying to find a safe place to make rice with the protagonist.

Aren't you still using both of them? It won't suddenly break again, right?

Are there any new patron saints? Once one is upgraded and added with skills, it is already sitting on a rocket. If there are more, it will just dig a hole and it will not grow even if it is filled.

Will Zhang Sanfeng become a guardian spirit?

Why do I think the plots in these pictures are the same as those of Versatile Mage?

Why are there always scenes where he is in love with a woman? There is something wrong with the plot, right? When he shows off his power, a woman pounces on him. Oh my god, it's a bit embarrassing.

The classification of immortal levels is simple enough. Once you become an immortal, you will become a saint? Awesome

A mess, one of the worst prehistoric books