
Grand Voyage: Summon Tokisaki Kurumi at the Beginning
大航海:开局召唤时崎狂三
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- Completed
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- 445k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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I remember the narcotics police were not allowed to show their faces.
Which of you is avant-garde? I'm almost guaranteed. Wwwwwwwww
I don't want to write about the fusion world. I write about it world by world. I can't accept all the beauties.
I've vomited so much high-end combat power that I can't save two generals, and only one woman with average strength is left. What are you doing?
Why were the green pheasants and yellow apes released? It is better to chase down the poor bandits but to be brave than to become the overlord. One general is incompetent and exhausts the whole army to death. I just have this sense of déjà vu. The protagonist is destined to be criticized.
Can the heroine write mei? I think mei is pretty good
Author, I'm not bragging, but with your current writing style and plot advancement and update speed, it will be difficult to survive until the next world. If you pick up all the women in the pirate world, forget it. The key is just to collect those few. If you don't write the plot quickly, it's just too much. To be honest, it's almost the same as your last book. I suggest you go and read The Great Voyage and snatch Nami on the ship to see what they wrote.
Momonosuke's plot is not enough, I think we need to add more information, such as a fencing master, penetration plan, and oral cleaning plan.
I have read some One Piece novels. The top masters in them are like Whitebeard. He fights the elves in Date A Live back and forth. I am speechless. The elves in them are all rules-based. One Piece is a piece of shit. And some authors have overestimated One Piece. Date A Live is very strong. This book is good. The elves are not weak.
Yue Guangshi has been dead for twenty years, so why is she so pregnant? Might as well let Hiyori come
This is a cool article, okay, fill it up directly
To be honest, I really don't think there are many good-looking names in One Piece. After all, the proportions are too extreme. They usually start at two and a half meters.
What's going on with Suo Jun? ? Don't have so many wealthy second-generation people with backgrounds messing around with the protagonist.
After writing so much, none of the four emperor generals have died, the territory has not been touched except for some ordinary countries, and Brother Ming has begun to play protagonistism and how long he plans to stay. Who said that emotional scenes and the torture of Momonosuke are quite enjoyable, but the current plot is too slow. I have written so much and haven't started to focus on the war. Also, Robin's hobbies seem a bit abnormal. . . The relationship heats up too fast, and the protagonist touches her all over in less than a day. Control the description of the character's personality, otherwise she will fall apart too easily. Based on Robin's childhood experience, she should be more vigilant than other members of the *hat group.
It's too little and it's not enough to watch. In addition, how long does the author plan to delay? Is the protagonist still not strong enough to conquer the pirate world? Doesn't Shirahoshi still need it?
Anyone who has watched Ultraman should know that Zeta, Aguru, and Gauss are really not the blue people of the Kingdom of Light. They are just blue.
Is Valon really handsome? I can't tell!
The creativity is okay, although it's a bit watery but I hope it's not too watery. Author, you can write too much with your creativity.
Can the third one be written about Ultraman Bass? It's Ultraman Bass from the Galaxy Fight III era.
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