Spirit Simulator: Stealing Fortunes and Taking Down the Chosen Heroine

Since you want to write a villain story, don't use the useless counterattack routine. Remember, this is a villain novel. The villain is playing with his family background and has no bottom line than the protagonist. Learn to use force to overwhelm others

As a villain, the protagonist is too low. Without a golden finger, he is just a cannon fodder FW. Even with a golden finger, Adou cannot be helped up. No sense of substitution. Qu Shengxiao is just a knife in the hands of the lucky male protagonist. This knife is very sharp and easy to use. For the protagonist, the enemy should be the person holding the knife, not the knife. The protagonist is reborn, and what kind of brain circuit does he keep thinking about destroying the knife? It's not like this knife can't be stolen. What's the point of destroying one? The lucky male protagonist will encounter another knife under the guidance of fate. With the protagonist's IQ, it is natural that the past life ended tragically, which is very satisfying and not unfair at all.

You'd better not keep emphasizing what kind of villain you want to be, because you don't know how to create a villain character. Please look at the protagonist in your book and see if there is any villain character. On the contrary, the protagonist's plot is full of pretense and slaps in the face. Don't use your superficial To understand the villain, you need to see what a villain is. Jiang Yuyan is a tragic villain, Xiong Batian is a solipsistic villain, Gao Yao is a demon villain who fell into hell... These are a lot of film and television villains that you can imitate. So, how can the protagonist in your book have any villain character?

I don't know who created the simulation flow. What else can this kind of literature be used for besides water**?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is messy. Are the protagonist's parents dead? The first part is about being murdered, and the second part is about the second uncle asking for medical expenses from his parents, and also saying that he is now living with Aunt Lan. Is the protagonist rich and yet he says he has no money? He says he is a rich second generation but he has no money. He has no money to simulate but he has money to recharge his skills. It's really confusing. And even if Bobo will betray him in the future, that will be a thing of the future. What are you trying to do to Bobo now? Since he is so heartless, let him go and let him go. Why write about Bobo's psychological activities?

Why is it just kissing after so many chapters? Strange. Could it be. . .

No wonder he rushes to the streets like this. Killing a girl is too outrageous.

You don't have a level 30 one, your family does! I don't believe that a rich second-generation family doesn't have a bodyguard. Just find a reason to bring a few with you. If the second generation of rich people don't rely on their families, how can they rely on themselves?

I think the author's book can be used as an urban novel, but can you not put a layer of Pokémon skin on it? As long as you create a world of beast control, I don't understand why you want to write about elves. There are too few descriptions of beautiful bonds in the Pokémon world. I got into it because of the Pokémon factor in this book. I don't deny that as an urban novel, it has something to read, but if you add the Pokémon element, it's a bit inconsistent.

I have seen many novels written by the male protagonist Sha Yuan, but this is the first time I have seen the novel written by the female protagonist Sha Yuan.