Age of Discovery: The Ninja Aboard the Straw Hat Crew

If you don't even learn practical ninjutsu like the Three Body Techniques, how can you learn the teleportation technique if you don't know how to shave? But any normal person knows the importance of chakra. What's the use of learning all kinds of ninjutsu? It's better to change to a fairy body that is more practical. Look at Naruto from beginning to end. It is a Maruko-Kage shadow clone that relies on chakra to crush you to death. If Sasuke learns those fancy thunder shields, fire shields, sharingan and so on, it will be a tie with Naruto. If Aizen uses it, it will be as effective as Naruto. The battle of ninjas is the battle of chakra.

Chapter 3: Zoro has already exposed you by slashing a sword energy. Sword energy is called Flying Slash among pirates, and it can only be used by Zantetsu Swordsman. Zoro didn't realize Zantetsu's ability until he arrived in Alabasta and faced off with Mr. 1. Writing a book also requires extra lessons, right?

I don't know how to complain. In 2017, the main character was too low because there was no system. When it was activated, he and Luffy Zoro killed randomly in the naval base? Since it is Hokage's system, what about chakra? They didn't even say anything when they came up, they just killed them indiscriminately. If you don't know how, please don't write. If you want to write, just go to those free places and post it. **Wen, please don't stay here.

In general, just like the original work, there are many people, and there is basically no difference between watching this and watching the original work.

From the beginning of your introduction, you suppressed this and didn't let the protagonist develop, so I didn't want to watch it.

In Feilu, the protagonist is too weak to survive.

I looked at the table of contents and knew something was wrong.

There is something written at the back that I can't understand. Author, whose book are you guest-starring in?

What's written behind this, it doesn't follow common sense.

You should have noticed it when you use the move. It would be silly if you didn't notice it all the time.