Da Qin: Kill the Alchemists? but I'm Really a Qigong Practitioner

It's unreasonable. You've already maxed out your physical strength, but you're told that your physical fitness can't keep up?

You must know that my heroic and beautiful ancestor, although he became a little confused about immortality after middle age, he was not a fool.

I didn't want to read the first chapter. What was it about? The third dimension is always higher than the second dimension. Don't you know this? The protagonist you wrote is really useless

One action is not enough to shock an entire chapter, the next stop is another shock

Fuck you, if that's true, it's impossible to reveal even a single clue. How can it be hidden for thousands of years?

It's another random article, pieced together here and there, talking about this list and that list, either one by one, or simply writing it as a general role-playing novel, so as not to make people complain. Why are you writing here and there? The narrative is the same as Ori's. The character creation is too bad. If you can't write, then don't write. What's the point of writing randomly?

His surname is Zhao, he is also the son of Ying Zheng, right?

The subject matter is okay, and the main storyline attracted me. But it's too boring. I didn't believe what the author said in the comment section at first, but it's true now. Putting aside the fact that he has written so many words to describe people and things other than the protagonist, the author keeps repeating the story of the protagonist's breakthrough, with more and more animals coming to meet him, and repeating it over and over again. He also writes about 10 chapters after a breakthrough. The real content of these ten chapters can be summarized in 2 or 3 chapters. It is very redundant and makes people more and more boring as you read. If the author wants to write a long novel, but feels that the content of the story is not enough, then draw up an outline and judge whether it can be written as a long novel. If it is feasible, then write a long novel with in-depth content. If not, then refine it and write a short story. If the story line is short and you still want to write a long story, isn't it torture yourself and torture the readers? It is better to have a concise short article with interesting content than a long and stinky anecdote full of sourness.

Such a cliche plot is about the long-lost son of Qin Shihuang. Chapter 1 has constant problems, from the names of soldiers to the names of the emperor's sons, it's completely messed up.

Even a simple person shouldn't write such unrealistic characters.

Just watch it first and delete it immediately if it turns out to be someone else's son again.

There are **VIP points left and I cannot subscribe to one chapter. .

There has been no update for three days. It should be discontinued if there is no update today. **

Anyway, I deleted all the subscriptions and collections for this book.

What happened to the protagonist's soul's acquired energy? God, you can see the essence at a glance. So to say that you are brainless is too brainless, hey, and you are also deceiving others, hey.

Ah? This book has more than 100 chapters and it's not on the shelves?

I want to see the whole world grab the leading role

Leave a comment. It seems that I will not change the setting of the Korean comic heroine in this book. She should have been fucked before, but no patch was made, so she ran away!

This is the end. The author is too short.

You just change the soup but not the medicine

It must be a single heroine, not a harem.

When I first saw the cover, I just wanted to say something, author, your panties... Have fallen off.

If you update too slowly, you will lose people. . .

After reading dozens of novels of this type, a group of robbers must appear at the beginning.

Mdzz Over-speed regeneration means immortality. What's the use of over-speed regeneration when you are the emperor?

This protagonist is extremely unfilial. Even after his father died, he was planning a marriage for him.

The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. Please try harder (???_??)?

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