American Comics: Superman's Second Personality Becomes Homelander

I came in when I saw the title, but it turned out that it was just the beginning of the fight. Okay, that's just the beginning. But after reading it for a while, I found that the writing was poor, not that the narrative was poor, and the rhythm was poor. Without reading the title, I thought you were writing about Clark's fans in Marvel. The protagonist's existence only depends on a few words occasionally mentioned, and the darkening process should be written more compactly. According to you How many chapters should we go before we can see the shadow of the darkening? In the early stage, I wrote a massacre, but later it was cleared up, and Superman was the protagonist, right? The protagonist was not in a hurry, and just watched Superman being cleared away, without interfering. After a cursory glance at the title, at least 300 chapters did not lead to a chapter dominated by the protagonist. It was better to change the title to Superman's second personality, and ended up being purified by the halo of Superman's protagonist. The novelty has been almost exhausted, and there is no motivation to continue reading.