Global Elf: Cut Off the Ancestral Gyarados at the Beginning

You can write about Huang Rong, but why the hell can't you write about girls? Do you have to get a wife?

I won't talk about how to deal with the disputes in the front. I can still read without thinking. It's really annoying to see the thunder ninja rolling his eyes. In the original work, the Raikage knew that Konoha was weak due to internal fighting, so he sent ninjas to test it out, with the idea that if he failed, he would be successful. If the third generation was weak, he would have to push further, and if the third generation was hard, he would have his tail cut off. Therefore, the people sent here were all ninjas who were close to death warriors with low value but high loyalty. The result is here, knowing that Uchiha has the means to control the tailed beasts, knowing that Konoha now has at least two pairs of kaleidoscopes, but the result is that the tailed beasts are sent out? Delivery? Aren't you trying to test the bottom line with pawns? If you're fishing, it's just a matter of sending a car. Now you just open your door and send two old men to the front line, right?

As a junior high school student, cut off Hu Qin Jingru

It's not that it can't be compared, but Jiuyang Shengong focuses on practicing qi, while Jiuyin is more complicated. If it is simply compared with the speed of cultivation, Jiuyin cannot compare. Jiuyin is a top-notch skill composed of a bunch of first-class and super-first-class skills, while Jiuyang is a top-notch skill that focuses on cultivation.

The author didn't even know that Togepi could wield the Finger Kung Fu.

I think what you wrote about Magikarp went too far. Even if you are a Magikarp, you can write about it in the sky, on the ground, and in the air every second. Damn it, can you please stop being so exaggerated? Magikarp can't learn skills at all, right? If you write like this, you should at least let Dragon Blood Carp King evolve. Take it out again and show off! The unevolved Magikarp, no matter how talented he is, can only have combat effectiveness without evolution, right? They obviously didn't fight. You just have to make him look awesome. ,, In addition, I want to ask you, you can't just write the attribute of the person directly, wouldn't dragon type be enough? You guys are saying that I am of Dragon King bloodline. As a result, there is no dragon character in his attributes. Don't you think it's funny?

If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, then write about yourself. If you lick yourself, you will hypnotize yourself. If you meet a well-qualified elf, it is related to the author. He has a relationship with your Pokejigu. The embarrassing words and actions in the back will make me vomit, Sima Dong, and your gay friend is not a fat person and can't write, right? Trash, fuck you.

Li Gang is not so supportive

MB, how many chapters is this watered down?

Even after using the best Dragon Teeth dragon type skill, only Dragon Dance is too frustrating. Even if you add Dragon Fury, it will be fine. Look at Kojiro's evolution and you can use it.

For example, in the beginning, the purple one is Nidoqueen and the blue one is Nidoking.,,

As long as the protagonist is ruthless enough and decisive enough to take revenge, just don't be targeted and looked down on all the time. Don't write about Magikarp beating the elf gym directly. I have watched several Magikarp defeat the quasi-gods of the three families.

Are there two leaf stones in the C8 area of ​​the F-level forest secret realm? Otherwise, where did the protagonist find the Leaf Stone during the summer vacation after using one on the walking machine?

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Awesome calculation, you can figure out why you will die! ! ! ! ! Every system is like this! Why do you need a system? Is this three hundred years of recharging and three years of happiness?

**The author hurriedly wrote a few eunuchs, is it really too good**

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