I Told You to Escort the Goods, Not Lay a Hand on the Madam!

What the hell is this about? The protagonist has a hundred years of inner strength and is born with a talent. A Mu Gaofeng who is several decades old has a talent of 5. Why don't you become a Yuanying with just an ant?

You thief should write about people who are happily married and live harmoniously, and then you threaten and force them to be interesting! When you write about Cao Zei, it feels like two people are in love, without the stimulation of Cao Zei at all.

Is this all a hundred years of skill? The Qingcheng sect, a sect that is not even considered third-rate, cannot even do it. . . In martial arts, a hundred years of skill is the ceiling. Even in immortal martial arts like Fengyun, it is even better. But it will be useless when you are here. According to this setting, it will take a hundred thousand years of skill to defeat Emperor Shitian. You can just cultivate immortality, and martial arts are useless. . . . .

When I saw the magnetic fruit, I immediately lost interest. In the world of martial arts, can't we write about martial arts and the like? We have to do something nondescript.

I didn't read it. Is the magnetic fruit in the introduction serious? May I ask what the author's obsession with pirates is, why can I send flowers to a book like this these days? Putting aside how good your writing is, I know without even reading it that your description of the fruit must be filled with strong words. It's not about relying on fruits to do anything, but what about having fruits? Don't you feel disconnected?

I think the internal force combined with the magnetic fruit ability is a bit nondescript, but I can accept it if there is no problem with the plot. However, every time the protagonist uses the fruit ability, others are amazed and the science is popularized, which really makes me suffocate. Another point is that the protagonist bought four swords after gaining the fruit power. I was confused when I saw this. Top figures like Zhang Sanfeng in the martial arts world would be stabbed with a dagger and lose the ability to move. Wouldn't it be better to replace the swords with flying knives? And if you ask me, the protagonist's ability is as good as that of the sixth genius. If I had this ability, I would just buy hundreds of blades similar to small utility knives. During the battle, the blades will rotate at high speed. It is best to be distracted and controlled. If you can't just scatter them, just like a wasp, as long as you don't dodge in time, it will basically disappear. In ancient times, there was no concept of sewing, and the cutting angle of the high-speed rotating blade is different every time. Basically, it will break when it cuts, and there is no way to sew.

Golden Finger is good, but it's not well written and doesn't feel like a pig's trotter. The plot of the pig's foot fucking the lady is also criticized. Even if you hide it and say it's love at first sight, it's better than being a lustful ghost who makes you stupid.

The more I look at it, the more I look at it. The handsome little boy can blush and become more and more feminine. Isn't this just a hypocritical girl?

You can still watch pure martial arts, but you have to add the Qin Yin Yang family. . . . There are so many beauties in the Qin Dynasty that the author can't accept, so it's better not to read them

It's ridiculous, if Yue Bu** wasn't for the Huashan Sect, would he have become a hypocrite? As for Linghu Chong, I don't even bother to say anything.