I'm the Master of Magical Beasts at Hogwarts

They are all here to see you collect magical animals, not to see your nonsense. If you continue like this, readers will abandon you!

At best, the special effects of the new version of Amazon are better and not cruel. Think about the fighting style of Showa cute animals, either chewing them to pieces or cutting them off.

It doesn't matter if I don't know what the readers are looking for, it's still so watery.

**Novel, poor quality, a waste of youth and a waste of money Also, read the original work carefully before writing. For example, Neville's wand belongs to his father, not himself.

A large amount of water injection can be tolerated, but the self-created setting and plot are unacceptable. Not to mention that you simply say that magical animals cannot be purchased in order to suppress the protagonist's strength. You are overestimating the law-abiding awareness of the wizarding world. There are plenty of opportunities for black market transactions, poaching organizations, and interest exchanges to achieve your goals, and you will pay for your legal purchases. Then at a certain stage, he becomes an outlaw again and gets fat. Secondly, who put the name of Harry Potter in it is definitely not Karkaroff. He was a former Death Eater who betrayed a lot of his former colleagues to get away with it. He was so far away that he couldn't help but target Harry for no reason and insist on killing him. Instead, it was the undercover Barty, who was originally in charge of everything, but you wrote him as Harry's bodyguard, so he finally changed the trophy.

One hundred and ninety-nine what the hell? Can't you cut off Hu in advance if you accept Zhao Yazhi? Need second-hand goods? If so, you might as well travel back in time to the sixties. The famous beauties at that time were the clean ones. Also, the woman summoned by the system is not accepted? That's not the same as a leaky girl! One is the vision pattern. You don't have a system to write like this. After all, we are all mortals. Once you have a system, it will be extraordinary at the very least. If you are still describing things from the perspective of a mortal human being, then it's just NC. Mortal level, extraordinary level, spiritual level, immortal level, divine level. The lowest level of having a system is extraordinary. The lowest level of the training system is the spiritual level. In addition to martial arts, martial arts are also extraordinary and cannot reach the spiritual level. Since you are on the extraordinary level, you are not as strong as the spiritual level of cultivation. However, in this world of mortals, it is not like a great god can abuse vegetables at will in a novice village. You need to enlarge the protagonist's perspective. You write the protagonist like a fw. You can write like this without a system, but with a system your landscape is still so small. Put those in mortal eyes

How should I put it, the subject matter is very good, the setting is also good, but the writing style is too wordy. .

The protagonist talks too much, and the BB talks non-stop. Every time he poops, he has to explain why he poops! Every time you drink water, you have to explain why you drink water! Every time you eat, you have to explain why you are eating! I'm really convinced. How do you view this kind of gratitude? I have to explain it without saying a word.

How do you usually call seniors and juniors like this? It seems so awkward between labor and management. In the West, except for the elders, everyone is called by their first names, right?

Are you serious about playing with the Ten Thousand Beast Spirit Pearls in the Magical World? Just give a system space. Playing fantasy magic weapons in the magical world is a beautiful and immersive experience, do you understand? Muggles also hired dark wizards to deal with the protagonist and were not afraid of breaking the law of secrecy. If you are a dark wizard, you will not kill all those who ask you to get something for nothing instead of being nice. Anyway, the author said that dark wizards are not afraid of being hunted down by the Ministry of Magic. The author wrote the book completely without thinking, thinking he was smart and treating the readers as fools. A bunch of logic problems that look like they were written by a ten-year-old.

Can there be less irrelevant jokes and unnecessary complaints?

Most of the people who come in are about collecting magical creatures, so there can be less other plots, and the main writer is collecting magical creatures.

Didn't read the book. I want to comment. See you later. When I read this comment, I just want to say, me. A plant.

Are you going to be a eunuch again?

What the hell is this new chapter about? Getting involved?

Is it a cool novel, is it a harem? Is there any poison in it?

It's been more than 30 episodes and you haven't gone to school yet. How good are you? If you don't know how to write, don't write.

There have been fewer and fewer updates recently. Author, you have such a large space, and I don't think you have many magical animals. Magical plants can also be placed in the space. Animals can evolve, plants can also evolve, and some magical animals from our side are also arranged. I feel that the magical animals here have been criticized. They have evolved more beautifully and have more powerful abilities. If you can't find the magical animals from our side, just write them directly from the Book of Mountains and Seas. When it's time to fight the boss, you can directly release more animals than the people on the boss side. It must be fun, right?

The protagonist is also too stubborn. There is no climax in the whole story, it is all about the protagonist.

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