Hong Kong Films Begin with Hongxing

I don't quite understand whether the author doesn't speak Mandarin well or has a language barrier. A simple conversation scene is described in a stilted way. The preface and the follower are inconsistent. A name can be mentioned 57 times in a conversation. There are also some words that describe it that are ridiculous, such as the paragraph about Ahen with the Leg Sword: "I heard that you are very good with the sword. I don't know whether it is you or me! Let's see who of us is more powerful today." There are 45 "powerful" words in one sentence throughout the whole article! I can't bear to look at it. The author, I suggest you learn how to speak first, speak concisely and concisely, explain clearly, and be simple! How can you write a novel if you don't even understand the most basic principles! The character design of the protagonist is not even interesting. The boss talks in a blabbering manner and has no depth. The plot is forced to develop smoothly and is illogical. It doesn't matter whether the readers can accept it, so just keep writing!

Commentary on Chapter 102: Benefits Meet People's Heart (to be released at 07:00 on September 19) written by Wu Buqingfeng in "Hong Kong Films Begin with Hongxing".

Commentary on Chapter 147: Tachibana Masahito joins the company in "Hong Kong Films Begin with Hongxing" written by Qingfeng Wu.