
There Is a Doomsday in My Body, I Am Scared to Cry Naruto!
体内一头毁灭日,我吓哭鸣人!
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- 3y ago
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What a talented man, Obito killing two people is a heinous crime, but it is understandable that I, Itachi, would kill the whole family. 666. Yes, yes.
No, it should be said that it is Doomsday's personality. Maybe the protagonist is Doomsday himself, and Doomsday's personality may be an illusion of the protagonist. Have you seen Smallville? The Doomsday in it has two personalities, one is a human personality, and the other is Doomsday's personality, separated by black kryptonite at the back. Maybe the protagonist himself is Doomsday, and the protagonist himself is Doomsday. That would be easy, because the protagonist can obtain Doomsday's power by controlling his own power. With all the power and abilities, if the protagonist is not Destroyed Sun, then the Ninja World will be in danger, because it is possible that Destroyed Sun will destroy the entire Ninja World, or the entire Naruto Universe. Jinchuuriki may seem very strong, but in fact, if the tailed beast is gone, the combat effectiveness will drop by 90%.
I haven't read it yet, but I wanted to ask if anyone can bring some ideas.
When two people are face to face and preparing for a battle, their mental activities are as good as three chapters.
It's better to kill the dark stuff as soon as possible, it's really disgusting.
After reading the original work, I feel that this person is not good, but if I think about it carefully, he is only thirteen years old. No matter how mature a ninja is, the three views are not fixed at that time. Coupled with the guidance of Uchiha's old coins, a dark villain comes out. And in the finale, he was whitewashed by Naruto's mouth escape. The most famous person who was whitewashed by Naruto's mouth escape was Nagato, and those who were whitewashed by the mouth escape were all people with light in their hearts. Obito knew that what he did was wrong, but he entrusted all this to the world of Infinite Tsukuyomi. In reality, he could sacrifice anyone. Here I just feel that he is just an escapist from reality.
Sandaime: "Naruto, you'd better restrain yourself. I have ten thousand ways to make you miserable. Aren't you afraid that I will reveal everything you have done and attack Hinata?" Naruto: "Oh, do it, announce it, do something to Hinata. If you want to play, let's play together." Naruto: "Of course, I will lose everything. After that, I have nothing to lose. First, I will destroy the ANBU, the roots, and the Sarutobi clan, and then, kill all the ninjas, and then the critical infrastructure, like buildings and communications, and then, when I think about it, I will fucking wipe the Land of Fire off the map of the ninja world. Have some fun, I swear, When I finish all this, I will let the entire ninja world and the whole world be buried with Hinata. I lose everything and you lose the world. Listen to the Sandaime, I still prefer people to love me, really, but if you take away my opportunity and my Hinata, then I don't mind becoming the embodiment of fear, so please do it, Lord Sandaime Hokage, announce it and do it to Hinata." Sandaime: "..." Naruto: "No? I don't want to anymore? What should I say? You don't have any leverage at all, because I am a native of the motherland, and I can really do whatever I want."
In the anime, when Itachi used the Fire Ball Jutsu as a child, he could reach a diameter of eight or nine meters, but here it is only one meter.
1. Strength increases too quickly. In this case, the book will be finished quickly. As a result, you have no plot to write. 2. The content is boring. I actually skipped some parts of it. 3. There seems to be something wrong with his character. The Third Danzo ignored Minato's disguised oppression. Jiraiya said a few words and knocked people's heads off. 4. Let him despair when he is about to succeed? Shit. What kind of brain circuit thinking is this. Shuangwen has never seen many like this. 5 I hope the author will pay attention to typos. Also try to polish the plot as much as possible. Maybe the writing skills of the new author need to be improved. That's all. The subject matter is very creative. It's just that the plot and concept are a bit bloody. In addition, it would be better to control the plot progress. Otherwise, according to your progress, after another 100 chapters, you will have to beat all Otsutsuki. Or force it to be written awkwardly. Or change the map. Come on, author. Hope your opinion can be of some help to you
Author, do you really want to be famous or are you using this to create momentum? If you really want to hurt me, don't vote for my monthly flower ticket.
The starting point of writing about the meeting between the past and the future is quite eye-catching, I just hope that I can describe emotions in a delicate way. Don't brush it off. Write well