Wuxia Crossover: From the Start, I Made the Peacock Plume

Is this written specifically for Qin Chui to read because Qin Shihuang wanted to unify the various countries?

**'S peacock feathers can kill more than 30 masters and are made very quickly. I'm afraid that a chicken-feather martial arts world will fight to the death and make hundreds of them but still not be able to defeat them? Written by Luo Libasuo, written by someone who has mastered hundreds of Gatlings but is afraid of using a knife.

The protagonist is either sick or dedicated to the enemy. The protagonist buys worthless land with limestone in advance to set up a factory. The cement produced can be sold easily. The demand of ordinary people is not small, let alone sold to the court. If you want to contribute to the world, you can sell it cheaper. And if it is dedicated to the enemy country, when will ordinary people be able to use it?

If you don't write the plot and pile on the settings, you will just have to write down the life stories of eighteen generations of other people's ancestors.

The plot is too draggy, and Pig's Foot's character is not likable. I don't believe that Pig's Foot can't hear the sound of his own martial arts. Why don't I see Pig's Foot practicing his family's martial arts, especially Qing Kung Fu? Furthermore, the body-building skills can be self-improving, so why can't they improve their healing abilities and some conditions that restrict their practice?

At the beginning of Chapter 30, the author's brain went crazy? What should I write about Xiaomeng? Is it evil or not? The author of Super You?

It's funny, people like Cihang will be pure lotuses. If Shi Feixuan is pure, she can hang everyone in the world, including Li Shimin, and still be obsessed with being used by her. Do you think such a method is possible for pure and innocent people? They send women to seduce, which is to destroy the devil with their own body, and others are shameless and obscene.

The Grandmaster of the Five Ultimate Skills? They are all naturally gifted, and gold-based novels are generally low-level martial arts except for Brother * and Ah Qing.

It's too anthropomorphic, and there are so many opinions, all of which are long-winded.

It's rare to find a book like Peacock Feathers, but the writing is not good, many places cannot be connected, the plot is too vague, I have read twenty or thirty chapters**