Life in Siheyuan Dramas

I feel like the protagonist has never seen a woman.

Your writing needs to be improved, and the plot is not very distinctive. The scenes surrounding the protagonist are bland, no different from a supporting role. At the very least, you did not handle the emphasis on the protagonist well in the early stage. There is also a lot of nonsense in the early stage. There is not what should be there and what should not be. You impose it. I don't know if this is your first time writing or it's your Nth time. I'll give you a suggestion. Find a few novels of various types to read. Don't read, but learn how other authors write various plots and routines. Confucius said that three people walking together: there must be..., Come on, Saonian!

Most of the chapter is written with divergent thinking, and it is repeatedly emphasized that it is because I am not used to time travel and my thinking has diverged.

I didn't say anything about the reason, and I couldn't find a button to modify it. It was really a bit confusing.

Although Feilu is like this, the writing of this book is really unreadable. The plot has no ups and downs and is an alternative chronicle.

Commentary on Chapter 36: I am Still the Same Me in "Siheyuan Film and Television Life" written by the right hand who cannot control himself.